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Valentine's Day

Such a beautiful day
Friends, loved ones and you......
FLC8
Written by FLC8
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Re. Valentine's Day
14th Feb 2017 6:05am
I would capitalise the "you" in the spirit of Omar Khayyam's "Thou", which these lines have reminded me of.
Solomon_Song
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Re: Re. Valentine's Day
14th Feb 2017 12:24pm
Thank you
FLC8
Re. Valentine's Day
18th Feb 2017 4:27pm
so small
Now I am also proud
Thou art a
YOU
POET
Lady
again
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Re: Re. Valentine's Day
18th Feb 2017 4:29pm
Thank you dear poet
FLC8
Re: Re. Valentine's Day
19th Feb 2017 5:16pm
kindness be thy share when love notes you with your romantic lover compare do share lady poet
again
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Re: Re. Valentine's Day
20th Feb 2017 8:19pm
Thanks for the comment
FLC8
Re: Re. Valentine's Day
15th Aug 2017 8:53pm
ok all ld ones being cleared 300 pending still
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