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Haiku Renga: Alone on Valentine's

at Balboa Lake
sitting by the sunny edge
tossing geese dried bread
• ☀️ •
dreaming 'neath the trees
watching couples foot-peddle
in their rental boats
• 🚤 •
tourist visitors
on holiday take selfies
me in the background
• 📷 •
ducks gather & quack
I write in my field journal
the kids quacking back
• ✏️📖 •
walking slow head down
looking for two perfect stones
souvenirs to keep
• 👣 •
calling on my cell
telling him I have his gift
when he's off from work
• 🐯🐱 •



Renga = linked Haiku
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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