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Gave You My Love
Not exactly sure what you did with it
Couple of empty vodka bottles in the trash
You're still looking good for the camera
Back story
Star power
Salty tears
Hard work
You're like a stock I'm holding through losses
The minute I sell it, it goes up
Holding on
It's what we did before the fame
Innocence
Determination
No Botox baby
Couple of empty vodka bottles in the trash
You're still looking good for the camera
Back story
Star power
Salty tears
Hard work
You're like a stock I'm holding through losses
The minute I sell it, it goes up
Holding on
It's what we did before the fame
Innocence
Determination
No Botox baby
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Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 2:43am
you always give me a giggle at the end Poet.. loving her today as much as yesterday..
beautiful :)
love Brenda
beautiful :)
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 3:48am
Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 3:27am
Re: Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 3:49am
Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 4:11am
Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 8:07pm
you give too much - make them do the giving or it will sink you :-(
Good write :-)
Good write :-)
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Re: Re. Gave You My Love
13th Feb 2017 9:39pm
Re. Gave You My Love
14th Feb 2017 00:50am
This is complex and enigmatic... The last line really adds an air of mystery, good poem....
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14th Feb 2017 1:08pm