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And in the midst of all this steam, Love!!!  
The giving and receiving- Equal - with perfect energy!!!  
My Heaven...  
This Sizzzles Vee!!!  
All the luck in the comp!!!

Yes, lots n' lots of steam Mister Soul lol   and good amount of balance in pleasures, make good recipe for erotica.

They make it-,"Perfect!!!"

Bridges abridged under ocean's bed...Great image....You definitely owned this piece...outstanding Rina

Beautiful piece of poetry, Vee.

Love the tender ending
"I can't seem to wash
the naked smile off my face.

Knowing, owning, owned."
Adored those lines. Great pen


~anonshadow😏

Absolutely breathtaking.
A true sensual masterpiece, engulfed in a pool of desire and passion.
Beautiful imagery.

Spectacular

Like

sounds & scents in the air
& bodies in motion;
aqueous, acquiescent, & sexual...  

Rina, I am always thrilled when with sensual compass and protractor you plot heavenly, palpable curves. I can feel the shiver of rivulets and I can breath in scents of unbridled ecstasy. Bravisima goddess!

Superbly sensual, n hotly envisioned... Yea, it's that kinda fiya!! :)

Vee..this piece is another example of your unique eloquence of expression....in addition to your clever choice of metaphor.
You have given me an entirely new perception with regards to washing clothes! :P

And I must say,....that sometimes the very quality of another's voice...well.....somehow, it plays such an integral part in that final 'surrender'--from 'owning'....to being 'owned.'