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[font=Tahoma,Geneva]She lies on the bed
unfolding map of corners
all roads lead to you
Image: Random google find.
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[font=Tahoma,Geneva]She lies on the bed
unfolding map of corners
all roads lead to you
Image: Random google find.
Published 12th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 3:40pm
Aww, this is a great read in the build up to Valentine's day.
Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 3:57pm
Few words ...with great meaning.
Truly love this. ❤️
Truly love this. ❤️
12th Feb 2017 3:59pm
Aaawww look at u Tryin to locate me! lol. A short but very nice Lil ink my sweetheart :)
12th Feb 2017 3:59pm
Her internal compass guiding her directly to her cherished one!
A senryu that honors the sentiments of hearts-and-flowers day!
A senryu that honors the sentiments of hearts-and-flowers day!
12th Feb 2017 4:01pm
Fabulous imagery Rina...Great to see a Senryu here...That inspires me to post something I wrote the other day
12th Feb 2017 5:28pm
12th Feb 2017 6:26pm
12th Feb 2017 8:17pm
12th Feb 2017 11:23pm
if all roads led to me
I'd maybe wonder
who the hell designed
this town
although it is actually
a beautiful poem...
I'd maybe wonder
who the hell designed
this town
although it is actually
a beautiful poem...
13th Feb 2017 1:30am
Lovely poem, awful lot of imagery pact into 12 words, brilliant piece of work. You never cease to amaze.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
14th Feb 2017 5:43am
16th Feb 2017 5:48am
I love haiku and I feel like one should answer with a haiku, when encountered.
The breath of great winds
Is gathered by soft feathers
Thus strength is subtle
The breath of great winds
Is gathered by soft feathers
Thus strength is subtle
