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Your Lips
Those lips that
shimmer and shine...
Memories fresh
on my mind.
Gentle kisses
on my face...
Each one patiently
placed.
Those lips so soft
upon mine...
Velvety smooth
on my spine.
Lips that lightly
find their way...
Down known path
to feast and play.
How they cause
a hard response...
With a hunger
so pronounced.
How they hold me
tight and firm..
As teeth and tongue
make me squirm.
I can't help but
grab your hair..
As they kiss and
forage there.
Those same lips
that melt my Need...
That shimmer and shine
with my seed.
Gift my heart with
all its needs...
With words of love
and tender deeds.
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Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 4:22pm
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Re. Your Lips
Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:05pm
Such a sensual delicious piece.
Words of vivid imagery which allow the mind's eye to see and feel every touch and taste.
Hot..steamy ink.
Words of vivid imagery which allow the mind's eye to see and feel every touch and taste.
Hot..steamy ink.
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Re: Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 6:46pm
Such a lovely comment coming from one with such a sensual pen as yourself. Thank you You have brought much needed smiles Keith
Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 5:52pm
I really like the rhyme scheme of this piece. It is written in a way that is extremely captivating to the reader. Great job.
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Re: Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 6:50pm
Thank you so much AP. Another writer drilled it in my head...syllable count... syllable count....force the reader to hear it as you do. Very good advice taken to heart...a gift from a gifted writer
Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 9:30pm
Very much a turn on knot2much. The lips have so much promise, and if they fulfill your dream it's a fantasy realized. Fine work!
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Re: Re. Your Lips
9th Feb 2017 1:40am
I thank you for your always thoughtful comments Sir Crow. I truly appreciate the read and comments left. Keith
Re. Your Lips
8th Feb 2017 9:43pm
Re: Re. Your Lips
9th Feb 2017 1:42am
Hello lovely and Mysterious One I am glad to seee you again and truly appreciate your kind words. Keith
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9th Feb 2017 1:04pm
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9th Feb 2017 5:37am
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13th Feb 2017 9:11pm
I am so glad that you stopped by and left such kind words. It is always so nice to see you. Keith
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13th Feb 2017 9:13pm
Thank you so much for the read and comment. I hope to see more of you. Keith
Re. Your Lips
Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 7:43pm
A nice poem to build up the love for Valentine's day with.
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Re: Re. Your Lips
13th Feb 2017 9:14pm
Thank you for the kind words. I truly appreciate the read and comment. Keith
Re. Your Lips
6th Jun 2021 11:26am