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Deep between my Fangs
Just a short poem. Enjoy
Throat aching
Your fingers find my hair
My passage is yours for the taking
A suck like mine, so rare
Pulling you deeper
My breath to cease
Climax getting steaper
Waiting to release
My tounge waters
In wait for something to savour
Bursting warmth into my mouth
Swallowing my sweet labor
Throat aching
Your fingers find my hair
My passage is yours for the taking
A suck like mine, so rare
Pulling you deeper
My breath to cease
Climax getting steaper
Waiting to release
My tounge waters
In wait for something to savour
Bursting warmth into my mouth
Swallowing my sweet labor
Published 7th Feb 2017
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18th Feb 2018 7:48am
Bethy, I enjoy reading about this super-sensual experience from the lady's perspective. It is truly a selfless thing to do Brava!
16th Sep 2018 7:14pm
soft and sweety thirsty yes but desires it meets well done this appears to be ur erotica maiden
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3rd Jan 2019 3:39am
Thank you very much! Each line is meant for the imagination to mold into its own creation
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25th Jul 2019 11:46pm
Your Deep between my Fangs Is Erotic and Sensual. It couldn't have been Better.
Their is More Magic in a Tongue than words can Describe. To me the Tongue Awakens The Soul and Makes it Need More Than It can Get.
I am Joe from Whiting New Jersey and i just joined to get some practice in taking up writing again. In the past i have about 25 songs Copyrighted mostly about Personal Romantic Experiences. Do you rite from Personal Experience or Inspiration. I now am going to try to write Erotic Sensual Poems. Wish Me Luck.
Their is More Magic in a Tongue than words can Describe. To me the Tongue Awakens The Soul and Makes it Need More Than It can Get.
I am Joe from Whiting New Jersey and i just joined to get some practice in taking up writing again. In the past i have about 25 songs Copyrighted mostly about Personal Romantic Experiences. Do you rite from Personal Experience or Inspiration. I now am going to try to write Erotic Sensual Poems. Wish Me Luck.
27th Jul 2019 2:24pm
Bethy, Check out my Personal Experience Story Whip Cream Dessert. Would Appreciate A Comment. You Have A Intoxicating Smile.
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