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String Theory
Be my distraction?
Cut me into fractions
Make me small
Then spread out my ashes
Get high off of Molly
Then fry out on Acid
Combine both our masses
and snuggle to Disney classics
Nothing quite relaxes me
Like deep conversation
and acoustic strings
We'll string theories up like
photographs,
of memories we've never had
And light lighters up like
fireflies,
to a night we hope never dies
Cut me into fractions
Make me small
Then spread out my ashes
Get high off of Molly
Then fry out on Acid
Combine both our masses
and snuggle to Disney classics
Nothing quite relaxes me
Like deep conversation
and acoustic strings
We'll string theories up like
photographs,
of memories we've never had
And light lighters up like
fireflies,
to a night we hope never dies
Published 7th Feb 2017
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7th Feb 2017 4:55am
Hell yeah.. welcome to DUP Dance! Now you have me fantasizing about my next date with Lucy and Molly! Although, for me, Disney movies are creepy on acid (bahahahaha kinda for real doh), but the molly should take care of that problem ;) lolol
as far as your writing goes, I am impressed. I think your rhymes fit into the flow nicely...
"Combine both our masses and snuggle to Disney classics "
^ that is dope!
I also like the end. I think it makes it a little deeper and not just a "druggy" poem for lack of better words.. i have my fair share of those ;) I think you did a good job making this playful and generating some good vibes with your ink. Good Work!
I hope you enjoy your stay in this well-spoken corner of the interwebs!
<3
as far as your writing goes, I am impressed. I think your rhymes fit into the flow nicely...
"Combine both our masses and snuggle to Disney classics "
^ that is dope!
I also like the end. I think it makes it a little deeper and not just a "druggy" poem for lack of better words.. i have my fair share of those ;) I think you did a good job making this playful and generating some good vibes with your ink. Good Work!
I hope you enjoy your stay in this well-spoken corner of the interwebs!
<3
7th Feb 2017 5:18am
Thank you so much for the read, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had the best conversation with a girl at a party and it felt like we were the only people there, she inspired this poem for sure. I low key fell in love with her, or maybe it was just the drugs😂 Either way I'm glad I wrote a little momento. Thanks again for the kind words Brad!(:
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