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Éternité

 
the empty moments
turn to days & weeks & months,
caged eternity—
real life encroaching lovers,
taking leave amid the rain

abandoning us—
we who try to keep time still,
fallen to our knees
surrounded in the deluge,
casting our passions amuck

forsaking us here  
where we take what we have left  
and forget the rest—
there is 'now' with you alone
as there always was before  
 
 
 
 
(A Rensaku = linked Tanka)
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published | Edited 8th Feb 2017
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