deepundergroundpoetry.com
Teardrops in the rain
Tears should never be stolen, but earned and
to a faraway lover they are given as precious gifts.
We hold them close; we taste of the sadness and it
saturates our hearts like a warm summer rain.
I carry one small seed of hope in the palm of my hand.
Carefully I cup my fingers, offerings of protection against
an unsettling wind that threatens to snatch it greedily away
and I wonder if it will find you, should I let it go.
By some remarkable twist of fate our paths,
once desolate, have been finely woven into a tattered
wreath of Laurel, embossed with caesious blossoms
and the sine qua non of carnal knowledge.
When the wind shifts; find me there, I'll be at journey's end
'Neath the Laurel and the moon, wearing teardrops in the rain.
Nunc scio quid sit amor...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 11
reading list entries 2
comments 19
reads 1228
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Teardrops in the rain
3rd Feb 2017 1:37pm
there is so much beauty in your poetry
& in our carnal manifestations, Kas,
it prevents me from restricting
my rude remarks...
& in our carnal manifestations, Kas,
it prevents me from restricting
my rude remarks...
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
Passion is a very beautiful thing; and those carnal manifestations... Well, let's just say it would be a shame to put restrictions on such beauty. Such a man of passion, you are amazing, John...
Re. Teardrops in the rain
3rd Feb 2017 2:04pm
I am awestruck with the beauty of your words and imagery here. I think the gallery for your art must be very vast. So beautiful, Kasai :)
Willow
Willow
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:39am
Thank you, Willow, so very sweet. How I'd love to have a gallery full of beautiful things to share. I suppose DU is just that, many fine works of art here to see...
Re. Teardrops in the rain
3rd Feb 2017 2:49pm
This is such a beautiful depth of love and caring, Kasai. One must protect that tiny light, be it a flame or teardrop, in today's world of jealousy, betrayal, and greed.
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:43am
So very true, wise one, and so it should be cherished always. Thank you for sharing with me, Ahavati, always a pleasure...
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:48am
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
3rd Feb 2017 4:04pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:50am
Ah yes, what a beautiful metaphore, Melia. Always enjoy your visits, thank you kind lady...
Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:19am
Wow... the phrasing is amazing as is the imagery...
I always smile when I see Latin, it suits this piece so well...
Outstanding write, dear Kasai
I always smile when I see Latin, it suits this piece so well...
Outstanding write, dear Kasai
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 6:55am
Thanks for such a sweet comment, Duende, glad I could make you smile. Latin just has such a beautiful sound to it, I couldn't resist...
Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 3:46pm
lovely Kasai keep that beautiful seed close to your heart and may passions tears nourish it..
breathtaking write..
love Crim
breathtaking write..
love Crim
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
5th Feb 2017 2:18am
Thank you, sweet lady, I keep it close with all things dear to me. Such lovely words you've left me with...
Re. Teardrops in the rain
4th Feb 2017 4:06pm
Simply beautiful...I was just writing a poem about where you'll find me 🙂...I hope to post it later today....I fell deep into your muse.
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
5th Feb 2017 2:23am
Re. Teardrops in the rain
6th Feb 2017 7:29am
Woman!
I can't with you this early
morning.. . this made me
feel every rifting emotion
On Cliff's Edge
-Howlings
I can't with you this early
morning.. . this made me
feel every rifting emotion
On Cliff's Edge
-Howlings
1
Re: Re. Teardrops in the rain
7th Feb 2017 6:15am
Thank you, kind lady, such wonderful words you leave for me. Love your visits, Howlings...