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Love Hate Relationship
Your beauty defies time
as you glide so effortlessly
across the boundless horizon
Breathless you capture my essence
and melt me from my frozen state
as the crackling embers spark nearby
My vision is blurred as if without end
crystal mounds begin to rise
and your effervescence illuminates the sky
Thoughts turn to a restless morning
where a painful path is purged
penetrating the virgin pure
If only these moments could survive
forever in child like eyes
life would be devine
as you glide so effortlessly
across the boundless horizon
Breathless you capture my essence
and melt me from my frozen state
as the crackling embers spark nearby
My vision is blurred as if without end
crystal mounds begin to rise
and your effervescence illuminates the sky
Thoughts turn to a restless morning
where a painful path is purged
penetrating the virgin pure
If only these moments could survive
forever in child like eyes
life would be devine
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Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 3:09pm
"If only these moment could survive
forever in child like eyes
life would be devine"
Ahh, the innocent belief of children. These lines sum up hope so well. Such a beautiful piece. :)
Willow
forever in child like eyes
life would be devine"
Ahh, the innocent belief of children. These lines sum up hope so well. Such a beautiful piece. :)
Willow
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Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 3:12pm
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2017 4:54pm
So very beautiful.
Your writing seems quite familiar to me.
So very passionate and talented.
Lovely ink.
Your writing seems quite familiar to me.
So very passionate and talented.
Lovely ink.
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25th Jan 2017 5:23pm
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2017 5:09pm
Hey JT........stunning ink that touches the heart.......beautiful lines thru out.......liking this a lot......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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25th Jan 2017 5:24pm
Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 6:13pm
To be overcome with the kind of love you have just described, is a wonderful, exciting thing.
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Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 7:41pm
Observing the beauty of nature renew itself every morning in light is akin to a rebirth of ourselves. In those few moments of capture, we travel with the horizon in a dream-like state until the heaviness of flesh, and the "reality" of Life anchors us down.
A true poem reflecting both the beauty gratitude and being in the moment.
Welcome to the Deep Side.
A true poem reflecting both the beauty gratitude and being in the moment.
Welcome to the Deep Side.
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Re: Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 9:26pm
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2017 8:11pm
beautifully written :)
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Re. Love Hate Relationship
25th Jan 2017 8:37pm
You have such a very elegant style with your words it's captivating!
FC
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FC
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25th Jan 2017 9:27pm