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What I think about love.
[font=Lucida Sans Unicode,Lucida Grande]I think about love.
I love love.
Love is a profound connection.
A mental connection.
Laughing at the same jokes.
Making jokes out of people.
Stupid people.
Enjoying the same things.
Having like-minded goals.
Trust.
I can't express how much trust means to love.
There's so much more to love.
But this inkling, isn't about love.
Most of the time, I just want a blow job.
Oh girl,
You could be the one.
We could have a lifetime of fun.
But first, suck on my love-gun!
Oh girl,
I love it when your eyes,
are full of joy and surprise,
when you put your mouth on my pipe.
Oh girl,
Just choke yourself on my cock.
Slobber on my knob.
Bob your head on my rock.
Oh girl,
Feast on my meat-stick.
Give my mushroom tip loving licks.
Devour my throbbing dick.
Oh girl,
blow my baby-maker!
suck my sailors,
You'll love the flavor!
Oh girl,
Play with my baloney pony,
Give it all your love, honey!
Your head game is right on the money!
Oh girl,
Play a song on my flesh flute!
Don't stop until I shoot
a steamy, hot load of my baby goo!
Oh girl,
This isn't all I like you for,
It doesn't make you a whore,
But when you're done, there's the front door.
I love love.
Love is a profound connection.
A mental connection.
Laughing at the same jokes.
Making jokes out of people.
Stupid people.
Enjoying the same things.
Having like-minded goals.
Trust.
I can't express how much trust means to love.
There's so much more to love.
But this inkling, isn't about love.
Most of the time, I just want a blow job.
Oh girl,
You could be the one.
We could have a lifetime of fun.
But first, suck on my love-gun!
Oh girl,
I love it when your eyes,
are full of joy and surprise,
when you put your mouth on my pipe.
Oh girl,
Just choke yourself on my cock.
Slobber on my knob.
Bob your head on my rock.
Oh girl,
Feast on my meat-stick.
Give my mushroom tip loving licks.
Devour my throbbing dick.
Oh girl,
blow my baby-maker!
suck my sailors,
You'll love the flavor!
Oh girl,
Play with my baloney pony,
Give it all your love, honey!
Your head game is right on the money!
Oh girl,
Play a song on my flesh flute!
Don't stop until I shoot
a steamy, hot load of my baby goo!
Oh girl,
This isn't all I like you for,
It doesn't make you a whore,
But when you're done, there's the front door.
Published 23rd Jan 2017
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23rd Jan 2017 8:01pm
23rd Jan 2017 8:32pm
Thanks Brenda, just figured since I'd love a bj, and I might be able to get a laugh from a goofy poem about one, are two great reasons to write one.
23rd Jan 2017 8:08pm
I love how you started off it being all about love to set us romantics for a huge fall...actually more a funny surprise than a fall lol.
It almost had like a sing songy feel to it... then I thought you were going back to a love story
'Oh girl,
This isn't all I like you for,
It doesn't make you a whore'
But then that ending! Wham bam thank you ma'am! Fantastic write CW! 😂👊
FC
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It almost had like a sing songy feel to it... then I thought you were going back to a love story
'Oh girl,
This isn't all I like you for,
It doesn't make you a whore'
But then that ending! Wham bam thank you ma'am! Fantastic write CW! 😂👊
FC
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23rd Jan 2017 8:35pm
It does have a sing-songy feel to it, doesn't it! How about that ending? Could you sense the sarcasm? But, that does bring up an interesting topic, though, right? Men often refer to, or call women whores, but, men also trick women into thinking there's something more, and then they get what they want, and kick them out the door. Kinda, with a blaming them feel to it, right? All along, the woman was manipulated.
Yeah the ending was a killer! Agreed women can give a man exactly what they want, need and ask for but then they're called a whore for doing so and the guy keeps treating them like a whore and of course is totally blameless...and if they behave the same way they're just being male! Total Double standard! So cool of you to point out that's guys can 'suck' too...but you CW rule! ✋
23rd Jan 2017 10:21pm
Absolutely. I'm a very harsh critic of male behavior. It's what allows me to separate myself from the rest of them in so many ways.
23rd Jan 2017 8:25pm
One day I will learn not to read erotics at work...Had me giggling with this one. :)
Willow
Willow
23rd Jan 2017 8:36pm
Haha!!! Jackpot! That's what I was going for, less serious, more goofy. Glad I could make you laugh, Willow.
Anonymous
25th Jan 2017 2:44am
THIS cracked me up...I am still giggling...and I can't even highlight a favorite stanza...they're all too damned good! WELL DONE!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
25th Jan 2017 7:29am
Wow!! Amazing! Thank you Taryn!! That's awesome. I mean, some of these are so effortless for me, it's amazing that they get so much love!!
Anonymous
27th Jan 2017 9:19pm
This is amazing ;)
27th Jan 2017 9:37pm
9th Feb 2017 1:58pm
9th Feb 2017 9:23pm
What about the blowjob parts? Those were pretty fun, right? Lol. I was mostly just goofing around when I wrote this one. Those first parts, though. They're true. All the love stuff. Thanks for the read and compliment Lana! Always a pleasure, sweetie.
