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Fuck Love
Love is;
A flame, a fire
So easily extinguished
Love is;
A warm breeze
Thunder and lightning will follow
Love is;
Like warm sunshine
Say hello to skin cancer
Love is;
Like a 9.7 Richter scale earthquake
Everybody dies
Love is;
Like a feel good rom-com movie
Totally full of shit
Love is;
An airborne virus
Its effects, always terminal
Love is;
A gypsy curse
The fangs and claws always come out
Love is;
Like praying to God
Totally and utterly pointless
Love is;
Like being a police informant
Ultimately, there is no reward
Love is;
Like a cute little kitten
Cute only until it shits in your slippers
Love is;
Like a helter skelter ride
Starts high, downhill from there
Love is;
like a red, red rose
It attracts pest, withers and dies
Love is;
Like electoral voting
A complete waste of fuckin time
Love is;
Blind, deaf, dumb and stupid
It disables the mind and soul
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:49pm
Re. Fuck Love
23rd Jan 2017 7:04am
My sentiments, exactly. Until recently, actually. But I'm probably just headed for more of the same. Oh well, I'm happy to just enjoy the ride. Very well written, by the way. Enjoyed
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:50pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Sep 2020 1:45pm
23rd Jan 2017 9:07am
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:51pm
Re. Fuck Love
23rd Jan 2017 10:41am
Gotta love this one! More great words of wisdom here David!
The grass is greener on the other side, except at night when nobody cares what color your lawn is...
JJ
The grass is greener on the other side, except at night when nobody cares what color your lawn is...
JJ
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:53pm
Re. Fuck Love
23rd Jan 2017 3:07pm
Keeping it fucking real, Macleod...
actually, I read the title and thought it was a poem about a special kind of love a man feels when he's fucking... Yep, you know what kind of love I'm talking about. The kind of love that a man will do and say real dumb stuff because he feels so good inside, but then the female goes and spoils the moment, because she doesn't like to mention the word "love" when fucking, because she knows the man is neck deep in pussy love... damn those smart women hating our fuck love!
Sorry, it's 2am and I should be asleep. Cool poem!
actually, I read the title and thought it was a poem about a special kind of love a man feels when he's fucking... Yep, you know what kind of love I'm talking about. The kind of love that a man will do and say real dumb stuff because he feels so good inside, but then the female goes and spoils the moment, because she doesn't like to mention the word "love" when fucking, because she knows the man is neck deep in pussy love... damn those smart women hating our fuck love!
Sorry, it's 2am and I should be asleep. Cool poem!
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:55pm
thanks for the read and of course the comments - I start to come to life about 2:00am :-) glad you enjoyed this one :-)
Re. Fuck Love
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Jan 2017 7:06pm
23rd Jan 2017 7:04pm
holy fuck
fuck & holy
yes indeed, amen & aum
goddamned loved this
tho i gotta say, like mister case,
I thought is was gonna be
find your heart via the hooha stuff lol
fuck & holy
yes indeed, amen & aum
goddamned loved this
tho i gotta say, like mister case,
I thought is was gonna be
find your heart via the hooha stuff lol
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:58pm
that's how most men do it (the H00Haa stuff) love is spelled L-u-s-t I hope you enjoyed it anyway :-)
Re. Fuck Love
23rd Jan 2017 7:24pm
damn it David your so fucking clever..
each verse slammed it home for me..
love Brenda
each verse slammed it home for me..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Fuck Love
1st Apr 2017 10:59pm
Re. Fuck Love
23rd Jan 2017 9:40pm
You've pretty much covered it David and still we come back for more...addictive is what it is 😉
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1st Apr 2017 11:01pm
Re. Fuck Love
31st Mar 2017 1:52am