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Looking glass
Looking glass,
I took some pills,
And they didn't fucking last,
I took a red one,
And it tasted like cherry blast,
I can see through my looking glass,
And i'm pissed off,
Because the high never lasts,
These pills aren't lasting,
And my anger is becoming ghastly,
Looking glass,
These pills aren't working,
They'll never last,
And only the red one,
Tastes like cherry blast.
I took some pills,
And they didn't fucking last,
I took a red one,
And it tasted like cherry blast,
I can see through my looking glass,
And i'm pissed off,
Because the high never lasts,
These pills aren't lasting,
And my anger is becoming ghastly,
Looking glass,
These pills aren't working,
They'll never last,
And only the red one,
Tastes like cherry blast.
Published 22nd Jan 2017
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22nd Jan 2017 2:43pm
Great flow, and repetition. I like the intermingling of anger with a lighthearted tune.
23rd Jan 2017 3:50pm
maybe this is just me but and how my view's always downing but I read it in the view of an angry suicidal lady, which I'm not saying is a bad thing, and I actually really liked it. nice ink :-)
