The Hollow

Chaotic one you have so much beauty in you that you would delve into another's darkness and help free them..

I love this it moved my heart greatly..

love Brenda

Nothing pleases me more. Thank you so much. What a wonderful comment. I truly appreciate that.

Much love! -Chad xoxo

I have felt just like this CW unfortunately it's a dangerous game though... I ended up broken trying to fix him and of course he didn't care to try and fix me. I try to be a good person but I have to be careful because I'm drawn to such negative souls.

Fantastic write though it flowed so freely and obviously hit home with me 😢

FC
💜

People are often VERY protective of their paradigms. Many people cling to the comforting lies they tell themselves. It's why I chuckle to myself EVERY TIME someone says they're an honest person. 90% have no idea that they lie to themselves, and everyone else on a daily basis in one way, shape, or another. Most people don't know this, but, our prefrontal cortex, by a lot of experts is referred to as the, "Rational lying brain".

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm stoked that this touched you. That's my goal. If nothing else, to put the messages out there, and let people decide if they want to use the info or not. You can never help someone that doesn't want it. But we can offer.

Guess they are as 'honest' as they are 'normal' haha. Still... I feel that some have their prefrontal cortex's working overtime and concocting all sorts of far-fetched lies 😁 whereas others are trying to be honest at heart if not in mind (or as honest as they can be without revealing too much truth) 😂

Now my head hurts lol but thanks for making me use it 😉

                           You have the key,
                                To be free
                           If only you’d let me,
                  Inside to let you see what I see


*Ooh* chills.
And that last line/stanza ... epic!
It resonates.
~xo, Devlin

That means a lot coming from such a powerful mind as yours Devilin! I love this poem. And each time I read it, I love it more. Thank you for commenting. You've given me a genuine smile.

So reminded me of Springsteen's "Brilliant Disguise".

I'm not familiar with it. I'll check it out. Thanks for the read and comment.

It was a solo album, written after Springsteen was divorced, thus many songs about failed love.

How to comment on a poem like this?

Such a deeply moving piece... it brought me to tears...

Amazing write, my friend!

Love it when you stop by and leave your thoughts, Duende.

Thank you!

I'm thrilled that this one touched you.

Holy shit...there it is again....what the....? How the fuck are sneaking in unnoticed?? Am I that inebriated? When do you want it back? Do you need it tonight?

xoxo Taryn

Oh my god! That filthy mouth! Where have you been all my life? (Woah there, remember we're a gentlemen!)
No! Listen, I'm a ninja, and you've peaked my interest.
I'm in, and out, in out...<~~~~Hehehe
Hey, what are we drinking? Pass the bottle! Pleeeease!

xoxo!!

RUMPLEMINZ!!!!!!!!!

*she hands him a shot*....cheers muthafucka!

Rumpleminz? You must be joking!! What are you not telling me? You must have bigger balls than I do!! *Cries a little, takes shot* Bottoms up!!

*She takes a quick peek*....

wait a minute...hold up....

I need something to compare them to....

*hands the BOTTLE back*

*Holds bottle in front of balls, as if to magnify them*

Haha I win!!

*Takes a swig, cough, choke, gag*

Woah there, don't go there! I know what you're thinking!

We never see ourselves clearly, only those closest
to us can see what's really going on in there...

It all depends on our level of self-awareness.

Thanks for the read and comment Kasai :)

I see beyond your lies.
Into the hollow, under your paradigms.
You don’t know that you hide.
But, I can help, let me inside.

Love that verse :)

Me too!! Thank you. It still makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside everytime I read it. Thanks for stopping by.