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Starless Skies and Silent Cries
And in this moment, the pieces crumble away,
Shake, shatter, and break.
It only takes one memory for my frame to fray.
How weak, or, strong, to hold it together for so long.
One moment, one thought, one picture, one song…
And, all that I’ve built, in an instant is gone?
How feeble and frail, how tattered this tale?
The kisses that caressed my lips have gone stale,
Memories threaten upon every exhale.
Everything that I’ve worked for, now, seems useless.
But, this is a lie, my fight is not fruitless…
But, why, in this moment, does my night sky seem moonless?
This is the part, where I dry the tears from my eyes…
Pick myself up off the floor, and rise.
But, just for this moment, I want to believe the lies.
Shake, shatter, and break.
It only takes one memory for my frame to fray.
How weak, or, strong, to hold it together for so long.
One moment, one thought, one picture, one song…
And, all that I’ve built, in an instant is gone?
How feeble and frail, how tattered this tale?
The kisses that caressed my lips have gone stale,
Memories threaten upon every exhale.
Everything that I’ve worked for, now, seems useless.
But, this is a lie, my fight is not fruitless…
But, why, in this moment, does my night sky seem moonless?
This is the part, where I dry the tears from my eyes…
Pick myself up off the floor, and rise.
But, just for this moment, I want to believe the lies.
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Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:21pm
How well I know this feeling... one moment you're shattered and everything feels useless, the other moment you pick yourself up and fight! After finishing reading the poem I read out loud each last word of each line and wow... you got the sound going in each stanza, don't you ;-)
Great write, my friend!
Great write, my friend!
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:30pm
Well, see, what I found interesting was, I'm so emotionally sound. I never stay down for long, and usually, I do pick myself up immediately. I know how to solve every problem, emotional or otherwise, but, here I am in this moment, and I want to feel this. That inspired me so much, that I knew I had to put this on "paper".
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I needed it.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I needed it.
Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:40pm
I'm quite the opposite of you... I'm as emotionally unstable as you can get them! I do believe though that being in the moment and feeling the emotion you go through is important! Of course you want that feeling gone, but the harder you push the more resistance you encounter...
I commend you on getting it off your chest and writing about it, I'm sure this poem resonates with a lot of people on here!
I commend you on getting it off your chest and writing about it, I'm sure this poem resonates with a lot of people on here!
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:44pm
There are subtle differences in the way men and women process emotions, hence the reason women are more likely to have higher levels of empathy. But, I have an abnormally high EQ, so I learned to process mine productively at a very young age.
Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:49pm
Additionally, those feelings, they never actually go away. So, pushing for them to go away, never works. They have to be replaced. Something negative, with something positive. It's like forming a habit.
Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:26pm
Chaotic one I feel this write deeply we build sand castles in the sand just to have the tide wash them away.. it's a melancholy feeling to be sure.. this is a fantastic mood piece..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 5:32pm
I love that metaphor. It does seem melancholy, doesn't it? Sand castles, only to watch them wash away. Sadness, is such a gift, isn't it. Purely, for it's beauty.
Thanks for the read and comment Brenda :) Your support means the world to me.
Thanks for the read and comment Brenda :) Your support means the world to me.
Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 9:32pm
Awww CW *cyber hugs to you!
What a brilliant but beautifully sad write...
I find the stronger people are the harder it is for them to break and because it happens suddenly there is no preparation for it unlike people who are always falling apart (me) haha.
I sense that you might be feeling a little guilt or self resentment for feeling this way but please don't because it's healthy to let it all out and I hope you feel better for it.
May the moon be present once again and the stars shine brightly for you!🌛⭐
FC
💜
What a brilliant but beautifully sad write...
I find the stronger people are the harder it is for them to break and because it happens suddenly there is no preparation for it unlike people who are always falling apart (me) haha.
I sense that you might be feeling a little guilt or self resentment for feeling this way but please don't because it's healthy to let it all out and I hope you feel better for it.
May the moon be present once again and the stars shine brightly for you!🌛⭐
FC
💜
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 9:59pm
No guilt, no resentment...Just, memories of unreasonable expectations. When we're talking about emotional strength, the more times a person practices strength and resiliency, the more they are likely to portray it, and vice versa.
Love the cyber hugs!! Very much needed.
Love the cyber hugs!! Very much needed.
Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 10:31pm
Glad to hear it :) Ah expectations I see... those are the worst my head is always making up things that life doesn't live upto.
Oh okay perhaps I should try that then... although after years of practicing the opposite I'd probably be terrible at it 😂
You're very welcome we all need a hug from time to time ☺
Oh okay perhaps I should try that then... although after years of practicing the opposite I'd probably be terrible at it 😂
You're very welcome we all need a hug from time to time ☺
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Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 11:35pm
The trick is to let the moment fill you and feel it in its entirety without letting it take control and holding you down. Sounds like you've a healthy grip on that. Took me decades to get there...rather dated myself just now, didn't I? Great write! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
14th Jan 2017 11:38pm
I agree. I'm not sure too many would understand that, but, I know what you mean. Dated yourself? Looks to me, like you haven't aged since you were 26!!
Thanks for stopping by, the read and comment! Always a pleasure to hear your words Willow!!
Thanks for stopping by, the read and comment! Always a pleasure to hear your words Willow!!
Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 4:01am
Chaotic....all I can say to you is this...I believe, mayhaps, I grew a dick for a spell and wrote this, yet have no recollection of doing so...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
15th Jan 2017 4:05am
Lmao!!!! That is the most hilarious comment!!! Omg! The dick growing part!! You're awesome Taryn!! Too funny!!
Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
15th Jan 2017 8:00am
Sometimes we have to embrace a moonless sky, even then, the stars remain beautiful...
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15th Jan 2017 4:00pm
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Re: Re. Starless Skies and Silent Cries
15th Jan 2017 4:04pm
That's for sure. And, in those moments, something beautiful can be taken away, or reborn. It's up to us to decide.
Thanks for the read and comment, AEMelia :)
Thanks for the read and comment, AEMelia :)