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Journey
When sullen nights obscured the way
to somewhere, you were there:
We slept in empty fields to find warmth.
We walked through ancient towns:
Some just barely alive
others on the verge of death.
While others waiting their turn.
We were together hand-in-hand
beneath the blood moon, in the fifth direction.
When the bones of my feet ached, the will to stand
gone, you were there to gently push me.
When the storm pounded the mountains around us
the rain falling unbroken, you were there:
After it passed you payed tricks
with my eyes you blinded me
as you darted between the clouds.
When the sky cleared and the earth shouted
We danced like idiots
for the joy to be alive.
I could not see you, but I could feel you
in my heart, in my breath, in my eyes.
to somewhere, you were there:
We slept in empty fields to find warmth.
We walked through ancient towns:
Some just barely alive
others on the verge of death.
While others waiting their turn.
We were together hand-in-hand
beneath the blood moon, in the fifth direction.
When the bones of my feet ached, the will to stand
gone, you were there to gently push me.
When the storm pounded the mountains around us
the rain falling unbroken, you were there:
After it passed you payed tricks
with my eyes you blinded me
as you darted between the clouds.
When the sky cleared and the earth shouted
We danced like idiots
for the joy to be alive.
I could not see you, but I could feel you
in my heart, in my breath, in my eyes.
Written by
mbass33
(matthew bass)
Published 14th Jan 2017
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Re. Journey
14th Jan 2017 5:00pm
Re. Journey
Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 1:24am
Matt, so good to see you again, missed reading your poetry and this is truly sublime, you know how to take the reader with you on your journeys.
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Re. Journey
15th Jan 2017 6:21am
Bass like distant thunder
Great to see you here with this poem that lifts the spirit
Great to see you here with this poem that lifts the spirit
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Re. Journey
16th Jan 2017 8:25pm
I liked this when you posted it but wanted to ingest it. It's absolutely beautiful, Matt. I simply have nothing else to add. How does one to a spiritual encounter like this?
I have missed your posts and am glad to see you back.
I have missed your posts and am glad to see you back.
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Re. Journey
19th Jan 2017 7:46pm
I liked how I could picture it as I read. I find that makes the poem more enjoyable and I'm not trying to put other poets down but I find that to be a rare quality in most of the poems and stories I've looked at.
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Re. Journey
1st Feb 2017 7:26pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9430/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9430/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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Re. Journey
11th Feb 2017 4:32pm
pure n mystic. .n yet to the ground & its core. feeling the soulful elements.. and this journey never ends.
write on m, thank you for the read.
write on m, thank you for the read.
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