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IAM ALIVE
Running out of this materialism,I am feeling free from every relation
Where peoples mind is full of low vision,where feelings are dead and emotions are buried.
And can proudly say “IAM ALIVE ALONE”………
Sleeping for many years in the same forest where everything made to forget in only seconds.
I had found my images lost in the crowd,I had found my emotions being raped by each one of them
Life at last seemed to be only an error and death was just my failure.
Fighting for one’s hope,one’s faith…a journey from darkness to light;
all were converted into pain when I realised that this world is nothing but “AN END”
I wanted to be happy for a moment by trying to search my lost images
But I found only the broken pieces lying silently n helplessly
Words were unspoken,my trust were stolen and tears were left behind
Whom I could only call as “MINE” ……..
But now I come up with a little hope and walk away believe in miracles
And can proudly say “IAM ALIVE ALONE”………………
Where peoples mind is full of low vision,where feelings are dead and emotions are buried.
And can proudly say “IAM ALIVE ALONE”………
Sleeping for many years in the same forest where everything made to forget in only seconds.
I had found my images lost in the crowd,I had found my emotions being raped by each one of them
Life at last seemed to be only an error and death was just my failure.
Fighting for one’s hope,one’s faith…a journey from darkness to light;
all were converted into pain when I realised that this world is nothing but “AN END”
I wanted to be happy for a moment by trying to search my lost images
But I found only the broken pieces lying silently n helplessly
Words were unspoken,my trust were stolen and tears were left behind
Whom I could only call as “MINE” ……..
But now I come up with a little hope and walk away believe in miracles
And can proudly say “IAM ALIVE ALONE”………………
Published 12th Aug 2011
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12th Aug 2011 9:30pm
Its "I am" its not one word. :P
you seem to write spoken word poems a lot... try looking into that. :)
you seem to write spoken word poems a lot... try looking into that. :)
12th Aug 2011 9:35pm
I think that maybe IAM i a trademark, it is also in the bio.
If not it should be now!
If not it should be now!
16th Aug 2011 9:07pm
I can very much relate to this. In spite of some translation/language type issues, I get your poetry very clearly. I could get picky about grammar, as a former English Teacher's Aide at my own former high school, I have seen much worse from Americans who grew up speaking, reading and writing English their entire lives. Assuming that English is not your first language, I think you express yourself well. Most of my students didn't know the difference between then and than.
12th Jan 2012 4:43pm
I love this poem <3 Idk about you being the only one alone I would consider just a different variation of individuality ;)
