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-shadow dancer
no one has ever cared to notice
all the times that she's died
so she stares at her reflection
like there's nothing to see
she feels like a ghost
with no place to hide
transparent and alone
like a colorless rainbow
searching for meaning
if she only knew
how her smile
is like the break of dawn;
how her soul lights the way
to places I'd never believed existed
brave shadow dancer
don't be afraid
for I know your heart better
than those whispers in the shade
-ed
all the times that she's died
so she stares at her reflection
like there's nothing to see
she feels like a ghost
with no place to hide
transparent and alone
like a colorless rainbow
searching for meaning
if she only knew
how her smile
is like the break of dawn;
how her soul lights the way
to places I'd never believed existed
brave shadow dancer
don't be afraid
for I know your heart better
than those whispers in the shade
-ed
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 11th Jan 2017
| Edited 14th Jan 2017
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Re. -whispers in the shade
12th Jan 2017 00:27am
What a beautiful message for your loved one. I hope she will feel it as lovingly as you shared it.
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. -whispers in the shade
13th Jan 2017 5:00am
Re. -shadow dancer
Anonymous
12th Jan 2017 1:03pm
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Re: Re. -shadow dancer
13th Jan 2017 5:01am
Re. -shadow dancer
Anonymous
12th Jan 2017 1:14pm
aaawww eddy
i hope you show this to her,
it's a damn fine piece of writing
a wonderful combination of dark & beautiful
xo
i hope you show this to her,
it's a damn fine piece of writing
a wonderful combination of dark & beautiful
xo

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Re: Re. -shadow dancer
13th Jan 2017 4:59am
She blocked me on Facebook today. Man I'm the Grandmaster of fuck-up. It's like dealing with you actually, lmfao...
Thanks for the kind words though, love...
Thanks for the kind words though, love...
Re: Re. -shadow dancer
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Jan 2017 6:58am
13th Jan 2017 5:04am
well, she's a fool
& her thunder cunt friend too
& her thunder cunt friend too

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Re. -shadow dancer
22nd Mar 2017 10:37am
Sometimes a poem makes the world stand still for a moment... your poem did that!
To me... this is as good as a love poem can get...
To me... this is as good as a love poem can get...
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Re: Re. -shadow dancer
22nd Mar 2017 1:07pm
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind comment. I'm very flattered... :)
Re. -shadow dancer
26th Mar 2017 5:21am
I enjoyed the clear contrast from the first two verses and the last two. it is well written.
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Re: Re. -shadow dancer
26th Mar 2017 6:52am
Thanks for your kind words and read. I'll be sure to return the favor...
Re. -shadow dancer
Anonymous
8th Oct 2017 5:28pm
you're such a wonderous composer, this is gorgeous.

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Re: Re. -shadow dancer
13th Oct 2017 3:03am
I’m humbled by your kind words. Thanks for reading... I enjoyed your writing and wish I could’ve left a comment, or two on a couple... 🙃
Re: Re. -shadow dancer
Anonymous
15th Oct 2017 9:13am
I will brave it one day. ;)

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