Soulmate Love  !!!

This is very cute

"The rays are your hair
The stars are your eyes
The comfort in red is your lips
The silky satin is your skin
The burning fire is the love i feel"

i really enjoyed those lines ^^

Thank you for your awesome comments So glad you enjoyed xx

Brilliant and so beautiful. Love the visuals and wonderful content. My kind of poem. Well done. moog.

So happy to receive such awesome feedback !!! Means so much !!! thank you xx

How about:    
   
"Soulmate Love  !!!"    
   
Golden rays shining bright    
Illuminate the dark of night    
Sparkling stars wherever you are    
Softly comfort me in red    
Laying close in our bed    
Silky satin covers near    
Burning fires fierce to feel    
Safe to touch    
Because I love you so much    
The rays are your hair    
The stars are your eyes    
The comforting red are your lips    
The silky satin is your skin    
The burning fire is the love I feel    
All these things I say to you    
Love will remain forever new !!!

Thank you for your wonderful version which i also love ..So appreciate you taking the time to advise and i love your positive comments

This is sweet... nicely done lady :)

Indeed flattered you read and took time to comment Thank you for your kind comments !!

it's love that brings the gold & the stars
& tender poetry...

So delighted to receive your lovely comments I am indeed honored you took the time to read

This is beautiful 😊

Thankyou !!

Love is always so beautiful and I love this poem.

Thank you so much

Cutely romantic, would be apt when the bedmate is blond (male or female).

Thank You !! The bed mate is Blonde Smiles

Sounds like you are on to a winner there, Cyber.

Exuberant colourful romantic write.

Thankyou so much !!