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Kaleidoscope World
oh, he found the dark road
failing at every turn
his world took him by the hand
and wasted his flower of youth
he tasted
he drifted naked
among smoke-filled rooms
phony laughter
one night stands and warm bodies
with cold hearts
his unspoken thoughts
kept him seeking for the truth
eh . . .when truth was addressed
he ran and hid
though his road was dark and dangerous
somehow he managed to
steer the course
and now he is here
with a kaleidoscope world at his fingertips
he sheds no tears
though spears have pierced his soul
the dark road
was what made him who he is today
a man who
has found peace
and happiness
life does surprise us
ŠNovember 9, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton
failing at every turn
his world took him by the hand
and wasted his flower of youth
he tasted
he drifted naked
among smoke-filled rooms
phony laughter
one night stands and warm bodies
with cold hearts
his unspoken thoughts
kept him seeking for the truth
eh . . .when truth was addressed
he ran and hid
though his road was dark and dangerous
somehow he managed to
steer the course
and now he is here
with a kaleidoscope world at his fingertips
he sheds no tears
though spears have pierced his soul
the dark road
was what made him who he is today
a man who
has found peace
and happiness
life does surprise us
ŠNovember 9, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton
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Re. Kaleidoscope World
7th Jan 2017 3:34pm
Jerry i'm still searching for that content place after the dark road sometimes I think i'm there than it alludes me.. beautiful to know you have found that contended place..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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7th Jan 2017 4:33pm
So very sorry the peaceful part of your world has failed to show itself. As you know, I still write dark at times, but mos off it is centered on the past. I can't let it go, it was such a HUGE part of me for most of my years. I have confidence that you, too will find your comfort zone. Thank you, yet again, for being here.
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Re: Re. Kaleidoscope World
7th Jan 2017 4:35pm
Thank you so much, Lily, for your kind thoughts turned in to words.
Hoping you are doing well these days.
Hoping you are doing well these days.
Re. Kaleidoscope World
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 7:11pm
The title alone I thought perfect Jerry, clarity here and there looking through the viewfinder and then distortion in other places...I hope to find clarity in all some day but I also accept such a gift takes much time...so I [im]patiently wait...lol...really enjoyed this...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. Kaleidoscope World
You will find that clarity, Taryn, I am positive that you will. Easy for me so say? Yes, it is easy for me to say, because I have been through complete and utter hell in my life, but I kept plodding on, and as I plodded on I eventually began to see things I'd never seen before. Difficult for me to explain what I mean, except that I realized that I had done the best I could through the years and the world was accepting me inside its beauty and freshness for the rest of my days. I believe that you will get there in your own unique way, and someday you will understand what I have said here today. Never quit being you. Never!
Yes, I still write dark . . . But it is always the past I am writing about . . . Not the here and now.
Yes, I still write dark . . . But it is always the past I am writing about . . . Not the here and now.
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 9:47pm
Jerry, thank you so very much for such a reply...I will be the silly me...and I will print it and put it in a box of things I keep which are special to me and one day yes, I will look at it, remember and be seeing it through different eyes to appreciate every word of it even more I'm sure....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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8th Jan 2017 4:03pm
Re. Kaleidoscope World
7th Jan 2017 8:50pm
Indeed, Jerry. Sometimes it's all in how you turn the kaleidoscope that determines what you'll see.
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7th Jan 2017 9:10pm
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 8:57pm
Wow Jerry....impressed with the reflectiveness of this piece.......luv the attitude as well.......grateful for the road he traveled.......casue all things in life is a pice of who we are today.....right here and now......awesome ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

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Re: Re. Kaleidoscope World
Thank you flower, for your thoughts. Yes, we can only be a composite of who we have been in our past. Thank you again.
Re. Kaleidoscope World
10th Jan 2017 10:22pm
Very well put Jerry. Not easy to reduce such a lifetime length of past into a precis which is so evocative. Glad you've found peace and glad you share such gems with us!
Thank You Jerry!
Thank You Jerry!
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11th Jan 2017 5:57pm