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Fuck You
today I feel at peace
blissful, even
and why shouldn’t I?
i’m a good looking motherfucker, with a sex goddess for a girlfriend
I work hard, and I’m loyal as fuck to my friends
there is one thing that has been irking me though
(surprise) that one thing is a girl
so with all due respect
I want to get this shita out of my head
and really, I’m just saying what needs to be said
fuck you
for all the times you said you cared
fuck you
for telling me you would always be there
fuck you
for the pain you put me through
and fuck you for the drama that still ensues
I could go on about how I was right, and you were wrong
but I’m sure you will just twist it around somehow
so I say a simple fuck you, I’m through
now I can finally move on from this bacteria
just know you taught me a lesson
tonight, I’m going to kiss my new girl a little bit harder
hold her a little bit longer
show her how much I appreciate her loyalty
because I dodged a hell of a bullet
one that was heading straight towards my heart
never again will I take my girl for granted
but as for you
yeah, enough said…
blissful, even
and why shouldn’t I?
i’m a good looking motherfucker, with a sex goddess for a girlfriend
I work hard, and I’m loyal as fuck to my friends
there is one thing that has been irking me though
(surprise) that one thing is a girl
so with all due respect
I want to get this shita out of my head
and really, I’m just saying what needs to be said
fuck you
for all the times you said you cared
fuck you
for telling me you would always be there
fuck you
for the pain you put me through
and fuck you for the drama that still ensues
I could go on about how I was right, and you were wrong
but I’m sure you will just twist it around somehow
so I say a simple fuck you, I’m through
now I can finally move on from this bacteria
just know you taught me a lesson
tonight, I’m going to kiss my new girl a little bit harder
hold her a little bit longer
show her how much I appreciate her loyalty
because I dodged a hell of a bullet
one that was heading straight towards my heart
never again will I take my girl for granted
but as for you
yeah, enough said…
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Re. Fuck You
7th Jan 2017 2:21pm
DC people do have a way of getting under our skin and distracting us from the loyal ones..
great write..
love Crim
great write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 5:00am
They sure do. This poem is more about having a backstabbing friend, and realizing the only person I need is the one I love. And the friendships that our healthy, for sure 😁
Thanks Crim!
Thanks Crim!
Re. Fuck You
7th Jan 2017 2:50pm
It's good to get all that anger out in your writing! Super healthy and appears to have helped you gain perspective again. I greatly believe these things happen for a reason.
Great write such raw anger and passion 💜
Great write such raw anger and passion 💜
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Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 5:07am
Yeah, this write was rather liberating for me. This isn't about cheating btw; I don't really want to give that vibe, lol. Sometimes people try to play games with you, and mess with your head at your low moments. Fuck those people 😁
Thanks for reading, my friend 🤗
Thanks for reading, my friend 🤗
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7th Jan 2017 3:21pm
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Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 5:14am
Lol, yeah. Those kind of people are selfish. Looking out for themselves. Tell you they care but will throw you under the buss once you are having hard times. A quick fuck you is much needed 😁
Thanks for enjoying!
Thanks for enjoying!
Re. Fuck You
7th Jan 2017 3:46pm
Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 7:06am
lol. Well it's not like that. Although I would like to think this poem is a way of fucking her in the ass 😂
Thanks for reading 😁
Thanks for reading 😁
Re. Fuck You
7th Jan 2017 4:43pm
Some things just need to be said!
Great write, my loyal friend!
I've only written one anger poem, which wasn't really angry to start with (lol)
Can you teach me?
P.S. Have fun tonight ;-)
Great write, my loyal friend!
I've only written one anger poem, which wasn't really angry to start with (lol)
Can you teach me?
P.S. Have fun tonight ;-)
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Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 7:11am
I'm at work. So no fun for me 😓
I just think of what I would like to say to a person. Art to me is unfiltered. Just say what you want to say. Not worrying about anything else.
And thank you very much! It's always wonderful to read your comments 😁
I just think of what I would like to say to a person. Art to me is unfiltered. Just say what you want to say. Not worrying about anything else.
And thank you very much! It's always wonderful to read your comments 😁
Re. Fuck You
Fucking high fives! hell yes,
this made me listen to head
banging musique.conceived
with classical
I mean... when you get in your
space, (you let go). I love your
mushy and wise parts. Though
I say that this one, I felt.
Yep kick rocks ...just saying.
-Howlings
this made me listen to head
banging musique.conceived
with classical
I mean... when you get in your
space, (you let go). I love your
mushy and wise parts. Though
I say that this one, I felt.
Yep kick rocks ...just saying.
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Fuck You
8th Jan 2017 7:14am
You seem to have some pretty cool musical taste 🤗
If I ever become a singer I will make this into a metal song for you 😁
Thanks for enjoying
If I ever become a singer I will make this into a metal song for you 😁
Thanks for enjoying
Re. Fuck You
After reading this poem I must say that I believe you are 😡 angry. That sure is a lot of fuck yous to go around. You sound much like an angry child who is kicking and screaming because he had to settle for the old toy he already possessed. I hope tonite when you kiss that little girl of yours a little harder that you say the wrong name.
Because wouldn't it be funny if the last fuck you was directed at you....no one wants to be second best or the one settled for. Why don't you think about that before having you next childish fit. Cuz I am sure if that was found out you would be sleeping alone tonite.
Enjoyed the
write
Hadenough
Because wouldn't it be funny if the last fuck you was directed at you....no one wants to be second best or the one settled for. Why don't you think about that before having you next childish fit. Cuz I am sure if that was found out you would be sleeping alone tonite.
Enjoyed the
write
Hadenough
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Re: Re. Fuck You
I'm not a child by any means. I say things how they are. Why would you read a poem named "fuck you" and expect something friendly? It's in angry poems for a reason, lol.
It's more about healing, and fighting for the people who care. Sometimes you have to say a simple "fuck you" and move on. Nothing childish about that.
Although your comment did make me laugh a bit... haha
P.S. There was no sleeping around. It's not that kind of poem. 😳
It's more about healing, and fighting for the people who care. Sometimes you have to say a simple "fuck you" and move on. Nothing childish about that.
Although your comment did make me laugh a bit... haha
P.S. There was no sleeping around. It's not that kind of poem. 😳
Re: Re. Fuck You
10th Jan 2017 10:29am
I think this write was totally necessary angry child or not lol there is no point suppressing your emotions for them only to resurface later in an unhealthy way.
I bet writing this helped you get rid of all that built up emotion and has helped you gain some perspective. I don't believe for a second your girl is second best I think you perhaps forgot how much you appreciated her for a while and it took someone or something to remind you, it's not like you cheated you made a connection with someone and it taught you a lesson again super normal and healthy. Now you are wiser and on a healthy recovery so I'd say this poem served its purpose and I can tell you are a good person so I just wanted to make sure you were having no second thoughts or guilt for writing 'Fuck you' because of one negative comment.
FC
💜
I bet writing this helped you get rid of all that built up emotion and has helped you gain some perspective. I don't believe for a second your girl is second best I think you perhaps forgot how much you appreciated her for a while and it took someone or something to remind you, it's not like you cheated you made a connection with someone and it taught you a lesson again super normal and healthy. Now you are wiser and on a healthy recovery so I'd say this poem served its purpose and I can tell you are a good person so I just wanted to make sure you were having no second thoughts or guilt for writing 'Fuck you' because of one negative comment.
FC
💜
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Re: Re. Fuck You
10th Jan 2017 11:22am
That's so nice of you to say 🤗
The girl I'm with I've know for 13 years. We been through many ups and downs. When a person is going through a down time or a separation, if someone comes along promising happiness; most people take the chance. The only problem is that not everyone means what they say.
My girl is number 1 for sure (she's 29 im 32, not children lol). Not everything is as black and white as happy and not happy. We needed something to remind us of that. No one is perfect. Most people try to hide their imperfections, I'm not like that.
And to be clear; I never cheated. I made connections in low moments but I own those. Me and my girl have been through hell. I think most relationships would of been done for good. She is worth every scar.
As for the negative comment. I don't mind it at all. I kind of like getting one of these once and awhile. I feel it means I'm doing something right. I'm talking truth. Some people hate that.
I will never regret any of my poems. They are always for me first and anyone else who wants to read.
Thanks so much again. Your comment made me happy 😊
The girl I'm with I've know for 13 years. We been through many ups and downs. When a person is going through a down time or a separation, if someone comes along promising happiness; most people take the chance. The only problem is that not everyone means what they say.
My girl is number 1 for sure (she's 29 im 32, not children lol). Not everything is as black and white as happy and not happy. We needed something to remind us of that. No one is perfect. Most people try to hide their imperfections, I'm not like that.
And to be clear; I never cheated. I made connections in low moments but I own those. Me and my girl have been through hell. I think most relationships would of been done for good. She is worth every scar.
As for the negative comment. I don't mind it at all. I kind of like getting one of these once and awhile. I feel it means I'm doing something right. I'm talking truth. Some people hate that.
I will never regret any of my poems. They are always for me first and anyone else who wants to read.
Thanks so much again. Your comment made me happy 😊
Re. Fuck You
10th Jan 2017 1:30pm
You're welcome I like to spread love, happiness and cheer whenever I can and I was worried it may have upset you...glad to see it didn't :)
Exactly like you said nobody is perfect and I too refuse to hide my imperfections they're what make me...well me :)
Exactly like you said nobody is perfect and I too refuse to hide my imperfections they're what make me...well me :)
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Re. Fuck You
10th Jan 2017 4:02pm
We have to do what we gotta , in order to protect ours brotha.
Yes sir,
Salute
Yes sir,
Salute
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Re. Fuck You
11th Jan 2017 3:22am
DC there is an error that's bugging me.... section 3 line one.... I reckon it should be due not do.. am not a reading snob but it kinda kept buggin' me mind.
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Re: Re. Fuck You
I've always said it like "with all do respect" stupid American 😂
I'll change it though 😁
I'll change it though 😁
Re. Fuck You
15th Jan 2017 11:08am
Re: Re. Fuck You
15th Jan 2017 12:21pm
For sure she was. And maybe i was there to remind her of her own situation.
Thanks for reading ^^
Thanks for reading ^^