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Fashion Statement
She can't step out without design
High fashion threads newly spun
From the Jovani Spring Collection
She struts in her Prada shoes
And swings her Gucci bag
A model of ostentation
And all heads turn as she goes by
Her smile is one of victory
And the sidewalk remains her runway
Triumph following to her door
But she knows her Master's taste,
Or lack thereof,
And loses the accessories
She peels off precious couture
And submits beneath his gaze
A goddess in her lovely prime
On her knees, without a stitch.
High fashion threads newly spun
From the Jovani Spring Collection
She struts in her Prada shoes
And swings her Gucci bag
A model of ostentation
And all heads turn as she goes by
Her smile is one of victory
And the sidewalk remains her runway
Triumph following to her door
But she knows her Master's taste,
Or lack thereof,
And loses the accessories
She peels off precious couture
And submits beneath his gaze
A goddess in her lovely prime
On her knees, without a stitch.
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Re. Fashion Statement
4th Jan 2017 10:05pm
Captivating Sir Crow. I like that you finished in a place where all the finery became nonessential. Bravo!
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5th Jan 2017 11:58pm
The clothes don't necessarily make the woman. They can be misleading, a distraction from her beauty unadorned. Thank you Gahdess!
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 10:57pm
A fashion goddess by day, and a submissive to her dominant by night;)
A signature Sir Crow piece. 💓
Love it.
A signature Sir Crow piece. 💓
Love it.
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Yep, she leads a double life, both a twenty first century fox and sweet submissive. She has it all! Thanks Heart....
Re. Fashion Statement
4th Jan 2017 11:27pm
There should be a LOVE button! You captured my attention from start to finish...the ending wrapped this poem so very nicely...LOVED IT!!
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Re: Re. Fashion Statement
6th Jan 2017 00:06am
Glad you enjoyed this Cyndi. I was trying for a surprise with docility at the end of the day for a high-powered career woman who dresses accordingly. Her Master just might set her free....
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 11:48pm
My Lovely Sir Crow, this right here is perfect...lovely...fantabulous...spot on and done as always, like only you do!! So happy to see your pen flow! With much love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Fashion Statement
6th Jan 2017 00:08am
Thank you Taryn! I'll try to keep my pen flowing. Gets a little blocked up sometimes....
Re. Fashion Statement
5th Jan 2017 00:35am
...because completely nude, wearing only a smile is all her master needs. Better than any designer threads or tailor-made garment on any given day. ;)
Pen kiss~
Pen kiss~
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Re: Re. Fashion Statement
6th Jan 2017 00:13am
Nothing like some elegant design but, still, the fewer clothes the better. Leaving a little something to the imagination has it's points but it's the revelation that brings the rush. Thanks Rain! Pen kiss back...
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5th Jan 2017 6:32am
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6th Jan 2017 00:15am
She can take all the advice she wants as long as she obeys her Master. Thanks Jen!
Re. Fashion Statement
5th Jan 2017 10:40am
Elegance... is a beautiful thing but when she unveils herself and lays herself bare for you to do as you please, that's where you grasp the true beauty of your lover.
Just... gorgeous ! 😎🌻🌞
Just... gorgeous ! 😎🌻🌞
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Re: Re. Fashion Statement
6th Jan 2017 00:18am
Her submission is a revelation and an act of trust. She knows her Master will care for her whatever she wears, or doesn't. Thank you Shadow!
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 3:35pm
still writing the most captivating vignettes....
.... loved this
xo
.... loved this
xo
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6th Jan 2017 00:19am