deepundergroundpoetry.com
your room
Somewhere in the labyrinth of my heart there's a door labelled with your name
It seals a small abandoned room, dedicated to you
It doesn't get visited often, gathering dust, forgotten
Cold and darkness plague within it's inner walls
Memories and broken promises are drifting the room aimlessly
Hopeful one day you'll join me to stare at them cozily, lulling myself to sleep
It seals a small abandoned room, dedicated to you
It doesn't get visited often, gathering dust, forgotten
Cold and darkness plague within it's inner walls
Memories and broken promises are drifting the room aimlessly
Hopeful one day you'll join me to stare at them cozily, lulling myself to sleep
Published 4th Jan 2017
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 10
reading list entries 2
comments 6
reads 812
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 7:52pm
So many words which resonate within me, while reading this piece.
Achingly beautiful 💓
Achingly beautiful 💓
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 8:00pm
<< post removed >>
5th Jan 2017 3:16am
I appreciate your ties between the longings of your heart and the hurt of broken promises encapsulated within the small abandoned room.
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 3:33am
Welcome to DU Keeper!! Very intriguing piece this is.......I could see the dust on many broken hearts floating around.....tears that have never been seen staining the walls.......a key still in the door waiting to be turned and unlocked......thought provoking ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Jan 2017 3:35am
5th Feb 2017 00:48am
