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SOLSTICE
The cloud shrouded stars
Run crowd and cower
As Earth tilts from the sun
Unturned untilled earth frozen
Beneath carcasses of sun beams
Too hard to intern
A tawdry tinsel of time threads
Find solace in solstice
As the uncertain tread
On drunken mirrors on puddles dank
A singular glint from earthly light
On black boots in the black gloom
Cling to that sing to that
For nothing is certain
How dark all earth smells
A panther absorption in absentia
Spell petrified in arachnid arms
Dilating pupils black as himba
Motionless before the menhir muttering
Tomorrow is not the darkest day
Tomorrow's not the darkest day
Today was
Run crowd and cower
As Earth tilts from the sun
Unturned untilled earth frozen
Beneath carcasses of sun beams
Too hard to intern
A tawdry tinsel of time threads
Find solace in solstice
As the uncertain tread
On drunken mirrors on puddles dank
A singular glint from earthly light
On black boots in the black gloom
Cling to that sing to that
For nothing is certain
How dark all earth smells
A panther absorption in absentia
Spell petrified in arachnid arms
Dilating pupils black as himba
Motionless before the menhir muttering
Tomorrow is not the darkest day
Tomorrow's not the darkest day
Today was
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Re. SOLSTICE
22nd Dec 2016 5:44pm
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22nd Dec 2016 6:01pm
Hey Crim - been having some dark days so love that this conveyed - great to see u here
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22nd Dec 2016 6:22pm
I hope your days get brighter Whale i've had some dark days myself..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2016 5:45pm
This piece reads like a post-apocalyptic; a struggle within one's self.
As if trying to overcome something dark and dreaded.
And the last repetitive stanza(s) ... now that's poetic!
It brings life to the poem.
Excellent, Whale;)
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22nd Dec 2016 6:02pm
U got that in one Devlin - great to see you back
Looking forward to post post apocalypse
Looking forward to post post apocalypse
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24th Dec 2016 10:52am
Re. SOLSTICE
22nd Dec 2016 6:49pm
And from here it will only get better, Brother.
Beautiful self-expression through verse.
Beautiful self-expression through verse.
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24th Dec 2016 10:53am
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22nd Dec 2016 7:21pm
This piece is inked with such intensity of emotion. As a reader, i can not only visualize the bleak landscape w i t h o u t, but i sense the darkness of despair w i t h i n the poet...one that delves deeply into the very soul......
Where your readers experience the bitter bleakness of Winter, your poem touches on a personal level--to be sure! Thank you for posting....helps those of us struggling to overcome our feelings of hopelessness to know we are not alone in this war...
( sending you the healing strength, and warmth of heart-shine.....Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara )
Where your readers experience the bitter bleakness of Winter, your poem touches on a personal level--to be sure! Thank you for posting....helps those of us struggling to overcome our feelings of hopelessness to know we are not alone in this war...
( sending you the healing strength, and warmth of heart-shine.....Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara )
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26th Dec 2016 8:34am
Re. SOLSTICE
22nd Dec 2016 9:50pm
This is pretty cool man. I like this, I ain't got anything poignant say. Nothing to add.
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26th Dec 2016 8:35am
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22nd Dec 2016 10:53pm
I was gonna post a link for You of the Brady bunch singing "let the sun shine in" but then I didn't want you to slit your wrists ;)
Always great to see your ink in town - on to brighter days!!!
Always great to see your ink in town - on to brighter days!!!
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26th Dec 2016 8:36am
hey good soul - love the Brady Bunch - everything gets solved in the course of an episode
Re. SOLSTICE
23rd Dec 2016 00:49am
here i am surrounded by wild nature and yet i find it difficult to write poetry about, so reading yours such as this is a great introspective pleasure. greetings, whale.
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26th Dec 2016 8:38am
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23rd Dec 2016 5:57pm
Light is all the more beautiful, blazes all the more glorious, after a long plunge into darkness. I feel you.
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26th Dec 2016 8:39am
ah yes nought so dark as the dark night of the soul dear DC - nor so bright as that dawn
would that it would come...
would that it would come...
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24th Dec 2016 10:52am
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26th Dec 2016 8:41am
and thank god bro - that these are merely seasons and seasons change- thanks for the add🙏🏾
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25th Dec 2016 5:25pm
I want to thank you for giving us peace through
your words I cannot say enough to compensate
..or say exactly how I'm truly affected by
many hiugs darling
-Howlings
your words I cannot say enough to compensate
..or say exactly how I'm truly affected by
many hiugs darling
-Howlings
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26th Dec 2016 8:42am