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Book
Let me spread you out like a good book I’ve been dying to read.
Let me open your legs wide and get lost in you, I want to discover all your secrets.
I want to know all those little things you hide from the rest of the world,
the things you’re too ashamed to share with another soul.
I want to spend hours between your pages,
hours memorizing the way your breath hitches as I slip my bookmark between your pages,
the way your back arches when I turn the page.
I want you to feel my passion as my fingers trail your words;
my anxiety as we approach the climax of this spectacular work of art.
I want to feel your body shudder as I reach the finale of the epic fairytale that is your body.
(((This is the first time I've ever tried something of this sort.. suffice to say I'm very nervous about how it'll go over so if you could please drop me a line to let me know how it is.. don't hesitate. Thanks a million.)))
- Unspoken_Ramblings
Let me open your legs wide and get lost in you, I want to discover all your secrets.
I want to know all those little things you hide from the rest of the world,
the things you’re too ashamed to share with another soul.
I want to spend hours between your pages,
hours memorizing the way your breath hitches as I slip my bookmark between your pages,
the way your back arches when I turn the page.
I want you to feel my passion as my fingers trail your words;
my anxiety as we approach the climax of this spectacular work of art.
I want to feel your body shudder as I reach the finale of the epic fairytale that is your body.
(((This is the first time I've ever tried something of this sort.. suffice to say I'm very nervous about how it'll go over so if you could please drop me a line to let me know how it is.. don't hesitate. Thanks a million.)))
- Unspoken_Ramblings
Published 21st Dec 2016
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2016 11:18pm
I love this!
I actually wrote a piece, entitled "The Book". Yours is far more delicious than mine. However, it also is about the hidden things, which are there, yet undiscovered.
There are so many details, which many never see, as they never want to get past their fascination with the cover.
Great ink 💓
I actually wrote a piece, entitled "The Book". Yours is far more delicious than mine. However, it also is about the hidden things, which are there, yet undiscovered.
There are so many details, which many never see, as they never want to get past their fascination with the cover.
Great ink 💓
22nd Dec 2016 00:01am
The things that you want to keep hidden are, more often than not, the most intriguing things about you. I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for the feedback.
Much appreciated <3
Much appreciated <3
22nd Dec 2016 2:08am
I liked it! Going back and forth between the book and body worked well as metaphor.
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