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Making love tonight
Tired of fucking and desiring of making love made me write this poem
Love making, connecting, orgasm after orgasm is beautiful
Kissing, screaming out of passion. Nothing Compares to that act.
Words full of desire, hearts biting fast, pussy wet as fuck , dick crying of happiness, is like a hard drug to our souls.
Hugs full of passion, slowly and fast paste depends on the emotion. Love making is what drives our pulse of devotion.
Making love tonight baby and orgasm after orgasm!
Love making, connecting, orgasm after orgasm is beautiful
Kissing, screaming out of passion. Nothing Compares to that act.
Words full of desire, hearts biting fast, pussy wet as fuck , dick crying of happiness, is like a hard drug to our souls.
Hugs full of passion, slowly and fast paste depends on the emotion. Love making is what drives our pulse of devotion.
Making love tonight baby and orgasm after orgasm!
Published 16th Dec 2016
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Kickass poetry, FLC8 . . . To try and do it with pretty
words just doesn't "get" it. Although I do attempt it
here and there. But to write of making love should be
as you have done here. Fucking and sucking and
getting physical in a semi or real hurt me, I'll hurt you
kind of way. Love your thoughts, FLC8.
words just doesn't "get" it. Although I do attempt it
here and there. But to write of making love should be
as you have done here. Fucking and sucking and
getting physical in a semi or real hurt me, I'll hurt you
kind of way. Love your thoughts, FLC8.
17th Dec 2016 7:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2017 8:23pm
16th Dec 2016 3:21am
But you don't need that first line in there FLC8 because I think it contradicts or goes against what you are trying to portray in the lines below it.
(Tired from fucking and desiring love, I wish to reflect for a second...)
...For example may be a better way of giving your opening line more validity or meaning as it implies, when you're not doing it, you are at least thinking about it, lol!. ;-)
(Tired from fucking and desiring love, I wish to reflect for a second...)
...For example may be a better way of giving your opening line more validity or meaning as it implies, when you're not doing it, you are at least thinking about it, lol!. ;-)
17th Dec 2016 7:48pm
16th Dec 2016 9:38am
it's a natural thing,
if we're not doing it, we're wishing we were.
nice...
if we're not doing it, we're wishing we were.
nice...
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