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'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
Peekin' back on when I...
was like, many otha,
"A nappy headed boy..."
Poor, black, n' hit wit hunger
ever wide-eyed with wonda
why'd life haveta be a motha...
I wish that haze,
no wouldn't come...
come back for more
why piss 'mind maze'
with that pain of yesterdays?!
I wish that phase no,
neva bedded in my core
don't miss that pain
that reigned a child galore...
Funny thang bout life
it neva wearied of it's path
tryin' it's best to pin me
wanna break me down...
But momma made me
"Endurin', surely made to last"
so its not gonna be so easy
to put me in the ground...
I wish that haze,
no wouldn't come...
come back for more
why piss 'mind maze'
with that pain of yesterdays?!
I wish that phase no,
neva bedded in my core
don't miss that pain
that reigned a child galore...
I recognize what saved me
was the knowledge gained
hit wit the wisdom elders
spit, n' fed unto the youth...
Truth was in 'That Muzik'
the kind they didn't wanna
see ripe, n' barin' fruit...
Ghetto life can be
so awful fuckin' hard
ruthless with that bangin'
but blessed with a real gift
of 'family- over material' gain...
Started reach in' for a light
I grew up to see the reasons
we all suffer strife, gotta keep
on pushin' n' don't give up
without a hella fight...
I wish that haze,
no wouldn't come...
come back for more
why piss 'mind maze'
with that pain of yesterdays?!
I wish that phase
was easier to endure
but I guess that haze
was destined for my core
Still, I don't miss that pain
that rained...incessant,
at this young child's door...
*inspired by Stevie Wonder
n those many REAL lyrical
artists of hip hop from the past*
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14th Dec 2016 12:37pm
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14th Dec 2016 3:00pm
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14th Dec 2016 3:54pm
Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
14th Dec 2016 3:40pm
You left me a bit speechless, Poetik...
I suck at commenting lately anyway, so can I give you a big hug?
I suck at commenting lately anyway, so can I give you a big hug?
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14th Dec 2016 3:56pm
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14th Dec 2016 4:51pm
Very moving poetik...that a one def hit me in the motherland here....vulnerable truth right here...
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Re: Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
14th Dec 2016 7:00pm
Thank you LA, you're so sweet... Truly honored n grateful for your support :)
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2016 2:25am
PM!! Heart hugging you and I will say this....
"but blessed with a real gift
of 'family- over material' gain..."
~ in this regard, you are blessed more than many...excellent vulnerable ink...
xoxo Taryn
"but blessed with a real gift
of 'family- over material' gain..."
~ in this regard, you are blessed more than many...excellent vulnerable ink...
xoxo Taryn
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15th Dec 2016 8:46am
Yea my brothers n sisters are all gems to me... Thank you my sweetheart, appreciate the continued support always :)
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15th Dec 2016 6:11am
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15th Dec 2016 8:51am
Thank you K, I'm happy to still have your support of my ink. Truly n always, grateful. :)
Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
16th Dec 2016 6:21am
moving fire....
caught that stevie flow right away and you caputred it and made it your own
respect..
caught that stevie flow right away and you caputred it and made it your own
respect..
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Re: Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
16th Dec 2016 10:44pm
Ah thank you bro! My deepest gratitude a for your wonderful comment n your continued support. Truly appreciate you much :)
Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
20th Dec 2016 3:26am
Always a fan of your lyrical acrobatics Brother. And it's your spare son, tear it a new one. All respect Brother.
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Re: Re. 'Ole Skoolz Pslams...'
20th Dec 2016 8:47am
Aaawww well that's honor bro. N I greatly appreciate your support always! :)
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20th Dec 2016 6:44am
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2nd Jan 2017 9:51am
Damn thought I replied to ur comment bro. Sorry bout the delay...
Thank you big time for the poetic love :) peace to you n yours :)
Thank you big time for the poetic love :) peace to you n yours :)
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1st Jan 2017 11:50pm
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2nd Jan 2017 9:54am
Aaawwww thank you bro. Truly means a lot when Anotha can really feel the weight of my thoughts... Peace n love to you n yours kid :)