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Vehement Atmosphere
Last time we conversed,
my mind was wet,
The second affect had me drenched,
Yet the third hit,
was much more dominant....
I was drowned in an intellectual hurricane
pouring lyrical scriptures in my ears,
injecting impulse into my veins,
Vibrato underway spewing down my
throat
manifesting poetic peace notes,
Unwinding my tense notions and ambivalence,
the unwillingness, the wall of uneasiness slowly dissipating
Sudden stomach drops of anxious proclamation,
Rivers stirred without any vulgar discussion,
Daring not to become an addiction,
a secret obsession,
to let those alto sound waves massage my ear drums,
Make my mind cum,
Produce gallons of forethought for foreplay,
ride out late conversations in the foremost way,
Becoming bottled up temptation in our careful game,
our preeminent grace......
Open my mind as wide as you can taste,
never letting the intrigue fade,
never mind distance or age,
the magnitude of the magnetic moods
set upon each date of different moons,
is beyond undeniable
Let our tête-à-tête be our escape,
our reason to contest life in the course it has fed us
Coerce intimate stories and intimidating details,
share all I can inhale,
let our primitive tendencies prevail,
so each other's souls we can unveil,
embrace and let our spirits avail
Feed upon every detail,
Drink the stories my life entails
Dine me with your life line
Wine me with your sophisticated incline
Enraptured in a momentary awe,
my reverence bows to you as your pawn,
turned my soul to royalty from bourgeoisie,
I wanted you to know me,
now the lust is forming,
need for you to mold me,
long to conform our beings,
Weld our spirits into infinite seeing,
Fuse your intimate knowledge to the stature of my inner beauty
Frolic in my chaotic views,
Peruse my wisdom
Engulf me as your poetic muse
Encompass my feminine fire,
as I worship your virile essence,
Touch can only be a pretense,
yet our conversation is immense,
hence the defense to commence
an integration of our worlds.....
Let us encase them and impearl,
walk along our artistic pleasance,
strip our delay and hesitance
and swim in our indirect mental presence
my mind was wet,
The second affect had me drenched,
Yet the third hit,
was much more dominant....
I was drowned in an intellectual hurricane
pouring lyrical scriptures in my ears,
injecting impulse into my veins,
Vibrato underway spewing down my
throat
manifesting poetic peace notes,
Unwinding my tense notions and ambivalence,
the unwillingness, the wall of uneasiness slowly dissipating
Sudden stomach drops of anxious proclamation,
Rivers stirred without any vulgar discussion,
Daring not to become an addiction,
a secret obsession,
to let those alto sound waves massage my ear drums,
Make my mind cum,
Produce gallons of forethought for foreplay,
ride out late conversations in the foremost way,
Becoming bottled up temptation in our careful game,
our preeminent grace......
Open my mind as wide as you can taste,
never letting the intrigue fade,
never mind distance or age,
the magnitude of the magnetic moods
set upon each date of different moons,
is beyond undeniable
Let our tête-à-tête be our escape,
our reason to contest life in the course it has fed us
Coerce intimate stories and intimidating details,
share all I can inhale,
let our primitive tendencies prevail,
so each other's souls we can unveil,
embrace and let our spirits avail
Feed upon every detail,
Drink the stories my life entails
Dine me with your life line
Wine me with your sophisticated incline
Enraptured in a momentary awe,
my reverence bows to you as your pawn,
turned my soul to royalty from bourgeoisie,
I wanted you to know me,
now the lust is forming,
need for you to mold me,
long to conform our beings,
Weld our spirits into infinite seeing,
Fuse your intimate knowledge to the stature of my inner beauty
Frolic in my chaotic views,
Peruse my wisdom
Engulf me as your poetic muse
Encompass my feminine fire,
as I worship your virile essence,
Touch can only be a pretense,
yet our conversation is immense,
hence the defense to commence
an integration of our worlds.....
Let us encase them and impearl,
walk along our artistic pleasance,
strip our delay and hesitance
and swim in our indirect mental presence
Published 7th Dec 2016
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7th Dec 2016 9:16pm
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7th Dec 2016 8:02pm
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7th Dec 2016 9:16pm
8th Dec 2016 6:41am
Loved the rhythm of the first stanza. Great emotionally charged write, LR. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
9th Dec 2016 3:19am
I'm glad you left a comment on my page, otherwise I might not have found you...
This is outstanding, seriously... I'm in awe!
This is outstanding, seriously... I'm in awe!
9th Dec 2016 6:27am
That is an honor coming from someone so poetically gifted! Thank you for reading!
9th Dec 2016 2:45pm
That's the intention!
I was going to copy and paste my favorite parts here, but, as I read this the third time, I figured it would be obnoxious to copy and paste the entire write here in the comments.
Fantastic ink, my friend!!
I was going to copy and paste my favorite parts here, but, as I read this the third time, I figured it would be obnoxious to copy and paste the entire write here in the comments.
Fantastic ink, my friend!!
9th Dec 2016 5:13pm
You always pump me up CW 😏. I appreciate you reading it, I should thank you three times hence...and am humbled by your kindredness in this piece. Thank you!
9th Dec 2016 3:37pm
so many quotes scroll down the mind
on this vibe...the arrangement of words..
heightened the intensity as i read each stanza
felt like you coulda kept this one goin
guess you had to stop at some point huh?..
phenomenal writing indeed..
on this vibe...the arrangement of words..
heightened the intensity as i read each stanza
felt like you coulda kept this one goin
guess you had to stop at some point huh?..
phenomenal writing indeed..
Thank you Naajir,
I value your input greatly. This piece is one of my favorites now....funny you should say that because it was originally much shorter and I just kept going. I also felt I could have kept going, kept the intensity building. I was worried about loosing the engagement of my reader, but the more I read it in my latenjivgts, the more I have surely been Adding to it 😊. Because it just does not seem satisfactory complete for me yet. You seem to know how my mind works. Now my dilemma is to either make it a part 2 or repost it once I've finally sufficed myself and feel it is truly finished.
Thank you for reading!
I value your input greatly. This piece is one of my favorites now....funny you should say that because it was originally much shorter and I just kept going. I also felt I could have kept going, kept the intensity building. I was worried about loosing the engagement of my reader, but the more I read it in my latenjivgts, the more I have surely been Adding to it 😊. Because it just does not seem satisfactory complete for me yet. You seem to know how my mind works. Now my dilemma is to either make it a part 2 or repost it once I've finally sufficed myself and feel it is truly finished.
Thank you for reading!
10th Dec 2016 8:01am
This piece is so rich in articulate vocabulary, nicely flowing in smooth mood of artistry.
10th Dec 2016 2:16pm
5th Jan 2017 3:49am
5th Jan 2017 10:35am
That was a graceful and touching thing to say. Thank you! I appreciate you reading.
