Unwritten Letter

Honest critique you said Rina? what critique? I reckon that question is a taunt..like if you can...  
 
well, profound and evocative it is in its effect on the reader. A job done ...in my humble opinion to prefection. Some poem I've read in quite a while... skill kills ..your's that is.

aww Kd my friend who just...happens to speak...5 languages :) thank you for your wonderful praise.  I dedicate this poem to all the people out there who feel love to certain someone but are afraid to express and each and every one of us have been that person at one time or another.

I reckon there'd be more men than women who'd abolutely agree with you Vee! You enjoy making me embarrassed don't you?(re just 5....)

I"m sure you know by now how much i enjoy your presence on the threads, you make it fun and engaging :)

well it's all the peers here that make this place so fun to me. otherwise you wouldn't find an anti-social(media) person hanging out here for so long. (Sorry- apologies for trampling on the beautiful ground of your poem)!

Feathers and dreams float upon True Heaven!!!
You walk tall young Maiden and Your footprint is always Giant.
No word I know can express the depth.

G, you know me well enough by now (and i know you well enough too) somethings are always hard to express, no?

yeah...almost hit the exclamation point down there at the bottom(automatically) lol cuz O my Three
Well...yes tis Very true...but expressed in Tidal-waves!!!

lol..and here i'm trying to stay out of trouble and you're going to report me (for all things unwritten)

This is an incredible piece, the third stanza really stood out to me, such incredible imagery evoked. This piece has such depth and such feeling. I certainly related to it. I thank you Vee for sharing this.




~anonshadow😏

It's a scary thing to be so vulnerable and probably that's the most universal feeling we all share. Thank you for enjoying this Anon, it will definitely be one of my favorites for sure.

You summarized so well deal Mourganna.  I firmly believe timing is everything and that in itself is one of those phenomenons in life.

This is so beautiful Vee !!

Thank you beautiful Jeje, its always so good to see you :)

lovely Rina I could lose myself in your beautiful lines..

so exquisite :)

love Brenda

Rina, I too suffer from pure white parchment of late. I understand the collisions and jumbles of thought.

I am touched by your loving, sensual remembrances. And I believe that no
matter the culmination of a
relationship we can still dwell on, warm our hearts by, and smile at the beauty and joy once experienced. This passage was exceptionally lovely
and fond memory provoking: "Whispers trapped inside threads of sheets  
as white as my unsent unwritten letter" Bravisima dear friend!

Sometimes letters aren't necessary with the manifestation of such poetry.

Very true Ahavati, and that's why we have poetry :)

the unsaid said unsaid all to the best of the four chambers - wonderful

Honestly I had no idea you felt this deeply for me!! ( yea right, in my flipping dreams!) Lmao... Anywho, this was captivating from the first line on my dear beauty :)

excellent verses,
& wonderful that they were written...

Such beautiful lines, I can't believe I haven't read you before.
Thanks for an amazing read...

That space wherein lay all possibilities.  The potential of the un-plucked string.  Well penned.

'unborn children with your eyes and my smile . . . . . . simply put and sincere uncluttered Lovely writing Vee

Wow. Great poem!

Thanks a bunch OG.

Wow simply beautiful 🙂

Thank you Tim, didn't i say it will compliment with yours?!

Yes, it does.