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SILBURY
Your hand in my pocket
My hand in yours
For warmth
For not a penny between us
And if this bench was our bed
My arm for your head
Bare bones for our chicken soup
We'd troupe from our coup
Melt frost with our mouths
And make love
On Silbury chalk
My hand in yours
For warmth
For not a penny between us
And if this bench was our bed
My arm for your head
Bare bones for our chicken soup
We'd troupe from our coup
Melt frost with our mouths
And make love
On Silbury chalk
Published 27th Nov 2016
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27th Nov 2016 10:09pm
27th Nov 2016 10:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Aug 2023 8:45pm
27th Nov 2016 10:25pm
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27th Nov 2016 10:48pm
28th Nov 2016 00:52am
Descriptive yet simple and pure...love this whale...memories of Silbury Hill... :-)
28th Nov 2016 5:26am
1st Dec 2016 11:43pm
Anonymous
28th Nov 2016 1:41am
Love this so very much.
Few words, overflowing with beautiful meaning. 💓
Few words, overflowing with beautiful meaning. 💓
28th Nov 2016 5:27am
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
28th Nov 2016 11:11am
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28th Nov 2016 12:31pm
28th Nov 2016 7:50pm
I do wish to write like this someday. Your alliteration is great and your lines sing. Great writing.
28th Nov 2016 8:37pm
29th Nov 2016 5:47am
I have to confess a little: this
truly made cry, I felt it ..I literally
felt it
as always but this one lend'd
me a scent and warmth, the
air show'd her face and smile to
me,,.. the bench encompassed
me while I sat beside these two
and I watch with pleasure, with
great deep aches of happiness..
this is so so touching and beautiful!
-Howlings
truly made cry, I felt it ..I literally
felt it
as always but this one lend'd
me a scent and warmth, the
air show'd her face and smile to
me,,.. the bench encompassed
me while I sat beside these two
and I watch with pleasure, with
great deep aches of happiness..
this is so so touching and beautiful!
-Howlings
29th Nov 2016 6:16am
29th Nov 2016 9:05pm
The exceptional beauty of true, (unconditional) love...needing nothing but itself....a rare treasure, indeed...
Whale, mo Chara.....while reading, this poem slipped softly inside me...hugged my heart and soothed my soul...
Your vivid words paint such a memorable picture....leaving your readers a bit envious of, and undoubtedly wishing for--just such a unique relationship.
Thank you for sharing !
Whale, mo Chara.....while reading, this poem slipped softly inside me...hugged my heart and soothed my soul...
Your vivid words paint such a memorable picture....leaving your readers a bit envious of, and undoubtedly wishing for--just such a unique relationship.
Thank you for sharing !
29th Nov 2016 9:58pm
