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Bye Bye forever
One whom says he loves you so
yet goes angry and I take the blow
hit by hit bruise by bruise
too little to understand what is going on
did I do something wrong?
a year passes by and you tell everyone its a lie
yet why do i cry and ache this way
they come to "save" me and
take me away from my mommy for a year with grandma
I Stay near gone away for a whole year
I grow older you never tell me
When I see daddy he tells me
As well as step mom filling me in too
Piece by piece this Death wish fills for you
My Hatred grows oh how I wish to eliminate you
alas I can not for you are my new sisters father
As I hate you I begin to hate her to born when i was six
no more mom and me just her and the baby fur
your all animals him most of all
bit by bit I wish you fall
This would make me merriest of all
Till this day i wish you gone for you have wronged and wronged again will no one destroy you for this crime to someone but the age just past three
at seventeen your face makes me burst in flames
wanting to extinguish you from my life
once and all doesn't matter that your six feet tall
one hit to the ball and down to the ground yo shall fall
Knife in my gloved hand
smooth and cold here is where this story unfolds
Blood dripping down you I laugh in cheer for tho are no longer thy fear but not not happy yet
Liquid I pour on your not cold body
a Match book in my other hand
It's lit in my hand kneeling down to the trail
boom there you go bye bye now
bye bye forever
Published 7th Aug 2011
| Edited 10th Aug 2011
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7th Aug 2011 9:47pm
while this poem has a good message i would consider having someone else proof read your poetry in the future. i found a few spelling errors as well as finding the way you phrased some things difficult to understand
