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"Erm"
My biggest problem
Is my inability
To solve problems
Making problems
More problematic
Making my conclusions
Positively inconclusive
Enigmas unfortunately
Remain enigmatic
All of life's mysteries
For me remain mysterious
Issues remain issues
As my solutions
Lack proper results
Making mysteries
Issues and enigmas
Into problematic problems
‘Oh damn and blast it all!’
Is my inability
To solve problems
Making problems
More problematic
Making my conclusions
Positively inconclusive
Enigmas unfortunately
Remain enigmatic
All of life's mysteries
For me remain mysterious
Issues remain issues
As my solutions
Lack proper results
Making mysteries
Issues and enigmas
Into problematic problems
‘Oh damn and blast it all!’
Published 25th Nov 2016
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25th Nov 2016 2:51pm
This is not your problem, it is a disease spreading through humanity and the only cure is human extinction. At least I like to think there is a cure...
JJ
JJ
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26th Nov 2016 9:27pm
Dave! Now it's confirmed!...........you are a human! I always held my doubts about you..some sorta stranded alien I thought but thanks for this reassuring poem. Nobody, I found delivered serious with such humour so far! Admire bot you and your craft mate!! Thank You!
15th Dec 2016 8:09pm
Erm don't be so sure, I am actually a Zillon from the planet Thaargh trying very hard to be a human (shit that gives me an idea for a poem)
thank you so much for such kind words, they are appreciated greatly :-)
thank you so much for such kind words, they are appreciated greatly :-)
