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Tu me manques
My lover, walks beneath a cerulean sky, a sky so beautiful that it reflects exquisite sorrow. I envy its azure depths, the way it casts itself above him from so far away. I am left alone, small and trembling, and I cry when the rain kisses his skin.
Our nexus is a lavish shower, a chrystaline dream of my feldagrau heart and when my lover lifts his face to the heavens, may he taste it on his appetent lips, his voracious dacryphilia sated by my lament.
He is a man of blue shadow with the moon on his shoulder and when he came to me in my darkness, he filled my heart with stardust and hope. We dance in the silver light, celestial bodies close and warm, but with morning's first blush, nighttide recedes and my lover slips away once again.
I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me.
Our nexus is a lavish shower, a chrystaline dream of my feldagrau heart and when my lover lifts his face to the heavens, may he taste it on his appetent lips, his voracious dacryphilia sated by my lament.
He is a man of blue shadow with the moon on his shoulder and when he came to me in my darkness, he filled my heart with stardust and hope. We dance in the silver light, celestial bodies close and warm, but with morning's first blush, nighttide recedes and my lover slips away once again.
I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me.
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Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 12:17pm
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21st Nov 2016 7:00pm
Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 12:28pm
beautiful, Kas; deep blue skies, a song of deep blues.
being a heathen of dacryphilia, a woman weeping
is the apogee of my desire...
being a heathen of dacryphilia, a woman weeping
is the apogee of my desire...
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 12:40pm
Such a wonderful comment, John, I love seeing you here.
Your words are saturated with poetry, always enjoyable.
Thank you for appreciating my tears...
Your words are saturated with poetry, always enjoyable.
Thank you for appreciating my tears...
Re. Tu me manques
Anonymous
21st Nov 2016 1:47pm
Absolutely ...breathtaking.
Beauty drips from these words.
Adore this piece 💓
Beauty drips from these words.
Adore this piece 💓
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 7:04pm
Much like tears,
Poetry would be nothing without them.
Thank you for the kind words...
Poetry would be nothing without them.
Thank you for the kind words...
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21st Nov 2016 3:06pm
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21st Nov 2016 7:08pm
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 7:11pm
Love those gentle breezes,
So nice that you could enjoy them with me.
Thanks for drifting through...
So nice that you could enjoy them with me.
Thanks for drifting through...
Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 4:15pm
Those last lines are amazing...
This whole piece is outstanding...
I feel you, Kasai... and I cry with you!
This whole piece is outstanding...
I feel you, Kasai... and I cry with you!
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 7:13pm
Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 4:17pm
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21st Nov 2016 7:15pm
Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 5:44pm
Kasai, you always write such luminescent pieces. Start to finish it's hard to not become emotionally involved in your words. And your endings...
"I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me."
Grab you by the throat and make you gasp. I love that you used cerulean blue. Very special color, and one I've used in writing myself. :) Love your writing, Kasai. You don't just write, you pour your beautiful soul into every word.
Willow
"I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me."
Grab you by the throat and make you gasp. I love that you used cerulean blue. Very special color, and one I've used in writing myself. :) Love your writing, Kasai. You don't just write, you pour your beautiful soul into every word.
Willow
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 7:23pm
Such sweet words you leave me with, Willow, very kind of you.
And yes, cerulean blue, a very lovely color that is quite beautiful painted in any verse.If a soul could be painted, perhaps it, too would reflect that color.
Thank you so much for the amazing comment...
And yes, cerulean blue, a very lovely color that is quite beautiful painted in any verse.If a soul could be painted, perhaps it, too would reflect that color.
Thank you so much for the amazing comment...
Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 6:14pm
I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me.
That is one of my favorite French sayings and it fits perfectly ending this. I love your expanded vocabulary here, Kasai. How you delve into words the same way you delve into verse, before rearranging them to fit the entire picture perfectly.
you..
are missing from me.
That is one of my favorite French sayings and it fits perfectly ending this. I love your expanded vocabulary here, Kasai. How you delve into words the same way you delve into verse, before rearranging them to fit the entire picture perfectly.
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
21st Nov 2016 7:30pm
I loved that saying, too. The second I found it, I knew it needed to be written.
I just love the thrill of finding new and interesting ways of expressing words into poetry, like a beautiful painting.
You're such a talented poetess, Ahavati, I really enjoy your insight and exceptional comments.
Thank you...
I just love the thrill of finding new and interesting ways of expressing words into poetry, like a beautiful painting.
You're such a talented poetess, Ahavati, I really enjoy your insight and exceptional comments.
Thank you...
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Anonymous
22nd Nov 2016 1:41am
This Kasai, is a breathtaking and visually stunning tribute to a most amazing man....WOW....I am completely blown away by this...just incredible...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
22nd Nov 2016 2:36am
Most amazing, indeed, Taryn, and what a sweet thing to say.
Such a wonderful comment from a very kind lady, I could just squeeze you for it.
Thanks for makin me smile...
Such a wonderful comment from a very kind lady, I could just squeeze you for it.
Thanks for makin me smile...
Re. Tu me manques
22nd Nov 2016 5:14am
This alone set me afire my ink mistress:
"I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me."
Nobody does it like you love
-Howlings
"I do not miss you, I whisper, I do not -
you..
are missing from me."
Nobody does it like you love
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Tu me manques
22nd Nov 2016 5:29am
Another wonderful comment from an amazing poetess,
How I do love those.
Thank you for gracing my pages, kind lady...
How I do love those.
Thank you for gracing my pages, kind lady...
Re. Tu me manques
27th Nov 2016 11:00am
Fingers plucking strings of deepest love
play such a song that moves the heart to tears
of joy.
play such a song that moves the heart to tears
of joy.
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27th Nov 2016 9:24pm