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unreal poem in an unreal world for an unreal girl...
everyone's delusional
I get that
because there's no such thing
as reality
although in
reality
you're
beautiful ...
Published 21st Nov 2016
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21st Nov 2016 8:17am
I cant figure out if this is a compliment or an insult to the unreal girl, not sure that it matters :-)
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
21st Nov 2016 6:28pm
21st Nov 2016 1:43pm
I'm with the comment from David_Macleod...compliment or insult? Great write though. You amaze me with your word genius! :)
Willow
Willow
21st Nov 2016 6:34pm
yeah, he sits on my shoulder
and whispers in my ear -
sorry, thought you said
genie... :)
and whispers in my ear -
sorry, thought you said
genie... :)
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21st Nov 2016 10:28pm
...if if's & buts were candy & nuts I wouldn't have to go out into the cold to eat....great write
21st Nov 2016 10:34pm
reality might not actually be real
but where else can I get great
doughnuts...
but where else can I get great
doughnuts...
