Fervid Variable

"My mind is.....wet
Legs like jello do not compare"

intense conveyance of where you're
going with this..

the things that resonate physically
never quite measure up to
or lasts as long  as the things that
resonate soulfully..
..
be-ing cosmic in nature
nurturing all that is metaphysical
in even the most basic of  human interactions should
be a prerequisite..

this though speaks beyond the basic..
eloquently so..

I appreciate, more value, your ability to read my words microscopically, dissecting every piece intellectually. And as always, you read me. I politely curtsey to such essence.

I like this piece;however, needs more kick to it.

I appreciate you opinion. "Kick", if I may say, would be open for interpretation. I humbly understand it was not your type of "kick". But at the moment....oh trust....it definitely was mine 😏

When I say kick, I mean I want more of a wow factor, I'd only say this to those who can mustard up such kick in the first place. I think you're an interesting writer, so I thought you could've done more with it;however, I do enjoy it. And all that matters, is if you're content with it, because at the end of the day, we're just the spectators within your world. Thank you for allowing me to view it from your perspective.

And thank you for allowing me to view from yours. I will work on hopefully restoring that "wow" factor 😊

Love the opening lines then it closes out with a bang. Great write, really enjoy the style in which it was written, it had a great feel to it.




~anonshadow😏

Thank you for reading and enjoying 😊

when you've been starving for so long I think you are well within your rights to be greedy... so bask in your overindulging till your waist deep in your cravings and then wade pass the deep end and swim for however far the overflow carries you...
masterful as always...

So intensely said. Yes, I think I will allow the overflow to float me into unknown realms and dimensions. Thanks for reading and vibing as always. : )

The zenith of lyrical aptitude stands firm in this finely penned ink!

I deeply appreciate you reading and overstanding!

I'm honored to draw inspiration from your work and help if I can. The term, "overstanding" Oddly, I've never heard of it. I like it!! Thanks, Lyrical Aptitude! ;)

It's not odd you've never heard of the term. It's not common, and I'm on life's unique soulful list. But to help, here is the intellectual definition of "overstanding": "the state of mind that emerges when all illusions- those in the conscious and subconscious mind- are removed; the intellectual state free from mis/disinformation, propaganda, lies, and deception; a grasp of the whole truth; human beings' natural state of mind undisturbed by the ego". Just something I prefer over "understanding" if you catch my drift 🌞

Fascinating! I said odd because I read a thesaurus like it's my bible! Lol! Your comment here, I need to add it to my reading list! What a great mind! We should have connected sooner! Thanks for the lesson. It's a tiny bit different, and vastly more interesting than the definition I read when I first saw it.

Ah yes...good I need to be different. Leave it to the good ol urban dictionary to describe it best lol. Well it's better our paths crossed later then never,  yes? 😊

Yes indeed! 💯💯😉😉

Aren't feelings put to meaning fun?  Or to words?  To know you is the great unknown.
It could take a lifetime.

Even after lifetime, there could be so much left to know 🌝 Thanks for reading!