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Fervid Variable
My mind is.....wet
Legs like jello do not compare
To the feel of this
this....tedious drip of my thoughts
fueling through my system,
neurotic sparks awakening
a sleeping vestige of lyrical ravening
I am now hungry
Starving
Not for a physical taste but a cerebral embrace
that will cause my medulla to over load
into a beating heart race
I just can't.....
fathom....
that the sense of my eloquent nature could co exist in non fictional meaning
Comfort flows so freely
Like past lives met, only to be redeemed
Re seen
For there is no reason to this.....kindredness
Id hate to hinder this,
this creation of long conversations
That later make you sit back
and want meditation
Just rewind and replay
smile and think of future things to say
the feeling is pure
Peace
Puts the soul at ease
Even if discreet
So simply complicated and sweet
Nothing wrong in the nurture of buried need.....
I shall feed and absorb with implicit greed
so please....KNOW ME
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Re. Fervid Variable
Anonymous
20th Nov 2016 6:49pm
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Re. Fervid Variable
20th Nov 2016 8:30pm
"My mind is.....wet
Legs like jello do not compare"
intense conveyance of where you're
going with this..
the things that resonate physically
never quite measure up to
or lasts as long as the things that
resonate soulfully..
..
be-ing cosmic in nature
nurturing all that is metaphysical
in even the most basic of human interactions should
be a prerequisite..
this though speaks beyond the basic..
eloquently so..
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
20th Nov 2016 8:43pm
I appreciate, more value, your ability to read my words microscopically, dissecting every piece intellectually. And as always, you read me. I politely curtsey to such essence.
Re. Fervid Variable
20th Nov 2016 8:57pm
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20th Nov 2016 9:06pm
I appreciate you opinion. "Kick", if I may say, would be open for interpretation. I humbly understand it was not your type of "kick". But at the moment....oh trust....it definitely was mine 😏
Re: Re. Fervid Variable
20th Nov 2016 9:55pm
When I say kick, I mean I want more of a wow factor, I'd only say this to those who can mustard up such kick in the first place. I think you're an interesting writer, so I thought you could've done more with it;however, I do enjoy it. And all that matters, is if you're content with it, because at the end of the day, we're just the spectators within your world. Thank you for allowing me to view it from your perspective.
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
21st Nov 2016 4:33pm
And thank you for allowing me to view from yours. I will work on hopefully restoring that "wow" factor 😊
Re. Fervid Variable
25th Nov 2016 10:12am
Love the opening lines then it closes out with a bang. Great write, really enjoy the style in which it was written, it had a great feel to it.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
25th Nov 2016 4:29pm
Re. Fervid Variable
28th Nov 2016 00:54am
when you've been starving for so long I think you are well within your rights to be greedy... so bask in your overindulging till your waist deep in your cravings and then wade pass the deep end and swim for however far the overflow carries you...
masterful as always...
masterful as always...
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
28th Nov 2016 2:55pm
So intensely said. Yes, I think I will allow the overflow to float me into unknown realms and dimensions. Thanks for reading and vibing as always. : )
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4th Dec 2016 8:09pm
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5th Dec 2016 4:11am
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5th Dec 2016 4:16am
I'm honored to draw inspiration from your work and help if I can. The term, "overstanding" Oddly, I've never heard of it. I like it!! Thanks, Lyrical Aptitude! ;)
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
5th Dec 2016 10:04am
It's not odd you've never heard of the term. It's not common, and I'm on life's unique soulful list. But to help, here is the intellectual definition of "overstanding": "the state of mind that emerges when all illusions- those in the conscious and subconscious mind- are removed; the intellectual state free from mis/disinformation, propaganda, lies, and deception; a grasp of the whole truth; human beings' natural state of mind undisturbed by the ego". Just something I prefer over "understanding" if you catch my drift 🌞
Re: Re. Fervid Variable
5th Dec 2016 12:30pm
Fascinating! I said odd because I read a thesaurus like it's my bible! Lol! Your comment here, I need to add it to my reading list! What a great mind! We should have connected sooner! Thanks for the lesson. It's a tiny bit different, and vastly more interesting than the definition I read when I first saw it.
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
5th Dec 2016 3:15pm
Ah yes...good I need to be different. Leave it to the good ol urban dictionary to describe it best lol. Well it's better our paths crossed later then never, yes? 😊
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5th Dec 2016 5:18pm
Re. Fervid Variable
5th Dec 2016 11:15am
Aren't feelings put to meaning fun? Or to words? To know you is the great unknown.
It could take a lifetime.
It could take a lifetime.
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Re: Re. Fervid Variable
5th Dec 2016 11:45am
Even after lifetime, there could be so much left to know 🌝 Thanks for reading!