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Women
As my eyes ponder upon the looks of each you
Your features catch my eye to reveal what is true
That you are all beautiful creatures heaven sent
Each of your features attacking my bodily senses
First the soft scent of your skin tickles the hair of my nose
Sweet smelling, full of aromas and perfumes you chose
Your touch as light as a feather glides over my skin
So elegant and soft, able to overpower powerful men
Your taste only given to those worthy enough of your lips
Soft and succulent, so full and precious, like whats in between your hips
Gods gift to man, meant to be treated like the queens you are
Only a real man should be the one weilding your heart
No matter your size, thick, skinny, tall or fat
Just know that you are all that
A walking temple of beauty and love
Women, angels sent from above
Your features catch my eye to reveal what is true
That you are all beautiful creatures heaven sent
Each of your features attacking my bodily senses
First the soft scent of your skin tickles the hair of my nose
Sweet smelling, full of aromas and perfumes you chose
Your touch as light as a feather glides over my skin
So elegant and soft, able to overpower powerful men
Your taste only given to those worthy enough of your lips
Soft and succulent, so full and precious, like whats in between your hips
Gods gift to man, meant to be treated like the queens you are
Only a real man should be the one weilding your heart
No matter your size, thick, skinny, tall or fat
Just know that you are all that
A walking temple of beauty and love
Women, angels sent from above
Published 5th Aug 2011
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5th Aug 2011 2:14am
Lashawn, what a nice descriptive and affective way to describe women.
The bonus is you even mentioned regardless of physical imperfection(s), and acknowledging that women are sent from above.
I love this.
The bonus is you even mentioned regardless of physical imperfection(s), and acknowledging that women are sent from above.
I love this.
5th Aug 2011 6:35pm
Thank You. Growing up with a mother like mine I've learned to really appreciate women :)
Anonymous
8th Aug 2011 4:22pm
Loved it all this line the most "So elegant and soft, able to overpower powerful men" wonderful job!
8th Aug 2011 8:15pm
10th Jan 2012 11:25am
"A walking temple of beauty and love
Women, angels sent from above"
Lovely way to describe the essence of the most powerful creatures to walk this earth - Women.
Women, angels sent from above"
Lovely way to describe the essence of the most powerful creatures to walk this earth - Women.
10th Jan 2012 4:03pm
Thanks :) if there's one thing in this world i appreciate in this world its the true beauty of women
