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Patience, Dear
gems and paper dolls
tarnished, tattered
yellowed with the fustiness of age
while our hearts are still shinin’
baneful masquerade
through pale winds we wait
‘til the Sun grows weary of our face
and the Moon starts shinin’
I give life all my love
that’s all I do
tarnished, tattered
yellowed with the fustiness of age
while our hearts are still shinin’
baneful masquerade
through pale winds we wait
‘til the Sun grows weary of our face
and the Moon starts shinin’
I give life all my love
that’s all I do
Published 11th Nov 2016
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11th Nov 2016 10:40am
I very much enjoyed this, and hope it gets put to music someday. :) It flowed really well and brought a small smile to my face reading it.
the first stanza
(gems and paper dolls
tarnished, tattered
yellowed with the fustiness of age
while our hearts are still shinin’ )
was above all my favorite
the first stanza
(gems and paper dolls
tarnished, tattered
yellowed with the fustiness of age
while our hearts are still shinin’ )
was above all my favorite
11th Nov 2016 10:43am
Wow! Thanks for such friendly comments, Michael. I really appreciate it. The song has been recorded, and it can be heard here for free:
https://soundcloud.com/michael-ash-sharbaugh/patience-dear
https://soundcloud.com/michael-ash-sharbaugh/patience-dear
11th Nov 2016 11:15am
I'll definitely have to check it out when my room mates aren't sleeping, haha. Thank you for sharing the link!
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