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...
...
This road
Leads to nothing
that is
what the signboard says
We used to
Be not this empty
Laughed under the
Rain. (but you don't remember.)
...
We used to be fully
Alive
Even under
The moon
..
When did we
...Get here?
When will the cold
go away?
Have we given up
hope?
Are we
dead already?
This road
Leads to nothing
that is
what the signboard says
We used to
Be not this empty
Laughed under the
Rain. (but you don't remember.)
...
We used to be fully
Alive
Even under
The moon
..
When did we
...Get here?
When will the cold
go away?
Have we given up
hope?
Are we
dead already?
Published 7th Nov 2016
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7th Nov 2016 1:34am
These are deep questions, Wandering One. But right ones you'll find answers to somewhere along the journey into yourself.
P.S. I still have Blueprint. I haven't forgotten.
P.S. I still have Blueprint. I haven't forgotten.
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2016 3:40am
Awe Wanderer.......so many find this place you've written.......when no words or thoughts are shared emotions don't flow......feelings get lost within yourself......some can be awakened again......some are never spoken from the depths of us......sad write that I feel deeply......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Nov 2016 10:09pm
18th Nov 2016 4:19am
I enjoyed this , a piece to make you think , whether it would be out of curiosity or from personal experience....but what's tragic about it is these questions may always be unanswered and there lies pain and incompleteness.
25th Nov 2016 10:22pm
