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No Love...Its Just Not Gonna Happen
Yet once again...
Uncontrolled emotions run down my face...bleeding down my neck. Every drop filled with longing.
I thought this agony would soon end.
I held the Sun for a moment.
Then the darkness scratched it from my hands.
Cold, alone, deeply broken.
Liars...they are all liars!!
Everyone of them out for self.
I just want to feel!
I will never feel!
Uncontrolled emotions run down my face...bleeding down my neck. Every drop filled with longing.
I thought this agony would soon end.
I held the Sun for a moment.
Then the darkness scratched it from my hands.
Cold, alone, deeply broken.
Liars...they are all liars!!
Everyone of them out for self.
I just want to feel!
I will never feel!
Published 3rd Nov 2016
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4th Nov 2016 6:35am
I held the Sun for a moment.
Then the darkness scratched it from my hands > how I feel these lines...
I don't have the right words to describe how this poem makes me feel, but it's deeply felt!
Those last to lines... oh my...
Then the darkness scratched it from my hands > how I feel these lines...
I don't have the right words to describe how this poem makes me feel, but it's deeply felt!
Those last to lines... oh my...
4th Nov 2016 10:58am
Thank you Duende,❤ sweet words.
That's the only description I could give...even still in rereading it, the word scratched aches my heart!
Again thanks for taking the time to read, I'm glad, yet not glad you found common ground. No one should feel this.
That's the only description I could give...even still in rereading it, the word scratched aches my heart!
Again thanks for taking the time to read, I'm glad, yet not glad you found common ground. No one should feel this.
4th Nov 2016 11:20am
So sad. I'm sure love is out there somewhere for you. Just don't fall for any city boys, lol.
4th Nov 2016 1:31pm
Hahaha...:)
I'd probably scare the crap out of em!
Ya ever had deep fried frog legs? Lmaooo, I bet they don't serve those at your local 5 star!!!
I'd probably scare the crap out of em!
Ya ever had deep fried frog legs? Lmaooo, I bet they don't serve those at your local 5 star!!!
4th Nov 2016 3:45pm
Gross, lol. And yes I've had them.
I wouldn't call Taco Bell 5 star, but it has its moments 😜
I wouldn't call Taco Bell 5 star, but it has its moments 😜
Rofl...yeah..I'm sure it does!!
Frog legs taste like chicken!
They are awesome...not gross! 😝
Frog legs taste like chicken!
They are awesome...not gross! 😝
Taco bells 5 star moments?
Are they found in the bathroom? Lmaoooo... don't front! You know what I'm talking about!
We tetotally just degraded this sight to the crudest of terms..
Lets get back up there buddy!
All metaphors, high roads and deep insinuations from here! 😎
Stop talkin so nasty DC!!
Their gonna kick you off here!
He did it!!! 👉 DevilsChild👈
Hahaha
Are they found in the bathroom? Lmaoooo... don't front! You know what I'm talking about!
We tetotally just degraded this sight to the crudest of terms..
Lets get back up there buddy!
All metaphors, high roads and deep insinuations from here! 😎
Stop talkin so nasty DC!!
Their gonna kick you off here!
He did it!!! 👉 DevilsChild👈
Hahaha
Wouldn't be the first time they've tried to kick me off 😒
lol 😂
And yeah, gross 😝
Taco Bell is my home away from home. I have a strong stomach 😎
lol 😂
And yeah, gross 😝
Taco Bell is my home away from home. I have a strong stomach 😎
