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"From the heart series" You COULD use...
A hug...
to shrug off the cold
loneliness...
A voice...
to mellow that bellows
away angst, evaporatin' the mist...
You could have...
Your way with passion
feed it unto your bein...'
Make this... the 'air'
you breathe in...
Bathe yourself
in this wealth of searin'
Let your soul replay
this song you're hearin...'
You could use
ME
If you wish to set
that insufferable pain
FREE...
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Re. "From the heart series" You COULD use...
3rd Nov 2016 12:16pm
You blew me away with this one, Poetik!
You are on an amazing poetry roll... love this one!!!
You are on an amazing poetry roll... love this one!!!
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3rd Nov 2016 1:18pm
Aaaawww... Don't know about bein on a "roll" but I am honored :) thank you my sweetheart. Truly appreciate the support :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Nov 2016 12:30pm
3rd Nov 2016 12:19pm
Thank you, honey.
I could really use this right now,
sometimes I'm boneless without
fabric , but for what purpose?
no one sees me anyways, not
even my love / he prefers
material earth.and not interlinkage
Sorry baby, we''ll have that talk
I think it'll be time soon
You've yanked my heart strings
I could really use this right now,
sometimes I'm boneless without
fabric , but for what purpose?
no one sees me anyways, not
even my love / he prefers
material earth.and not interlinkage
Sorry baby, we''ll have that talk
I think it'll be time soon
You've yanked my heart strings
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3rd Nov 2016 1:21pm
You're welcome sweetness... My pleasure, if you're smiling :) grateful always :)
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3rd Nov 2016 12:26pm
Poetikmind, I think your gonna need to attach a number-dex to this entry...me next...;) LR Xx
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 12:28pm
High fives on that, lol
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3rd Nov 2016 1:24pm
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4th Nov 2016 00:09am
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 1:51pm
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3rd Nov 2016 1:53pm
Re. "From the heart series" You COULD use...
Damn bro.
this is what a man does,
we don't suppose to tear down a powerhouse
A woman is full of galactic energies, I know
for a fact mine is.
and for those who has seen hurts float
in their faces, its because their partners just
refuses to respect, see and adore them.
Again no holiness speaking .
and sex always doesn't compensate either.
It will grow old through lies and pain
Brotha, keep this up, we may collab on
something
Ive been seeing so many walking sufferages
lately. Something is wrong.
this is what a man does,
we don't suppose to tear down a powerhouse
A woman is full of galactic energies, I know
for a fact mine is.
and for those who has seen hurts float
in their faces, its because their partners just
refuses to respect, see and adore them.
Again no holiness speaking .
and sex always doesn't compensate either.
It will grow old through lies and pain
Brotha, keep this up, we may collab on
something
Ive been seeing so many walking sufferages
lately. Something is wrong.
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Re: Re. "From the heart series" You COULD use...
4th Nov 2016 00:12am
Aaaeww... Thanks bro! N Yea I'm always down to collab. no doubt n yes I agree
Something is wrong... Truly
Something is wrong... Truly
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3rd Nov 2016 2:55pm
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4th Nov 2016 00:13am
I'm happy to know it touched you sweetheart... N grateful always for your support :)
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3rd Nov 2016 3:01pm
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4th Nov 2016 00:15am
PD! What up my nizzle? lol thank u dear lady, forever always appreciate u... :)
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 4:04pm
Hey Poet......what a write of putting yourself out there for someone to hug........enjoyed this.......sending much luv & many hugs to you xo :)
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4th Nov 2016 00:17am
Yea, I should be very ashamed but... lol
Thank u for the love n support always sweet flowery one :)
Thank u for the love n support always sweet flowery one :)
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3rd Nov 2016 10:01pm
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4th Nov 2016 00:18am
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4th Nov 2016 00:16am
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4th Nov 2016 00:20am
My goodness! She's back! n I'm jussa blushing away now lol... Grateful always my
precious one :)
precious one :)
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2016 1:23am
the epitome of compassion..
delivered with poetic passion..
moving write indeed bro..
very much so..
delivered with poetic passion..
moving write indeed bro..
very much so..
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4th Nov 2016 2:03am
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5th Nov 2016 4:10am
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5th Nov 2016 10:15am
Thank you sweet Grace, I'm happy you felt "wowed" appreciate you much... :)
Re. "From the heart series" You COULD use...
5th Nov 2016 7:38pm
ugh i could just hug ya right now papi
this was beeeyoootiful beyond words...
... straight up loved this to pieces
xoxox
this was beeeyoootiful beyond words...
... straight up loved this to pieces
xoxox
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Re: Re. "From the heart series" You COULD use...
6th Nov 2016 00:45am
N you know that'd melt me to pieces! :) thank you my sweet Katja, super happy to hear from you, n always grateful for your support :)
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6th Nov 2016 10:06am
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6th Nov 2016 3:54pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
9th Nov 2016 12:21pm
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