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Love, if it's enough
Before I sleep, I close my eyes to feel you next to me. I see you there, feel your breath warm on my cheek. And even though your eyes are closed, I can see their brown depths beneath your peaceful lids. And they are beautiful reflections. Reflections of us.
My heart yearns to rise like the sun, but is suspended between the moon and a star. My spirit follows upon stones to the brooding music of your chamber; my soul remains tethered in midnight blue. When you hunger, I give my flesh, complete. When you thirst, my tears will sustain you. This is what I give, and it must be enough.
Love was a stranger to me, even when I said those words to other men. You call me Tereska when you desire me, you call me lover when I am in your bed. But if on some tomorrow you do not feel in your heart the same as I feel for you, on that day, you must call me stranger.
My heart yearns to rise like the sun, but is suspended between the moon and a star. My spirit follows upon stones to the brooding music of your chamber; my soul remains tethered in midnight blue. When you hunger, I give my flesh, complete. When you thirst, my tears will sustain you. This is what I give, and it must be enough.
Love was a stranger to me, even when I said those words to other men. You call me Tereska when you desire me, you call me lover when I am in your bed. But if on some tomorrow you do not feel in your heart the same as I feel for you, on that day, you must call me stranger.
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Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 9:24am
love is a stranger that some may never meet, Kas,
but your poem affirms that lovers with this kind of passion
will never be strangers...
but your poem affirms that lovers with this kind of passion
will never be strangers...
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 9:42am
Yes, John, love should not have to be a stranger and not to know it is such a lonely place. It is that passion that keeps us close.....
Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 12:02pm
"Love was a stranger to me" > oh how I can feel this line...
That last line hurts, when two people connect they will never be strangers (or so I hope to believe)
That last line hurts, when two people connect they will never be strangers (or so I hope to believe)
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 6:42pm
To truly love another for all of their strengths and weaknesses, to believe changing them would make them someone they were not meant to be, means never to be strangers, and that is the deepest connection. That is love....
Thank you, Duende
Thank you, Duende
Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
4th Nov 2016 7:05am
Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 12:37pm
"But if on some tomorrow you do not feel in your heart the same as I feel for you, on that day, you must call me stranger."
To live in half-life, half-love...better then to not live it...strangers then. So beautiful, Kasai. Your words have such depth to them. Searing and painful, beautiful and wild, strangely comforting...so many emotions you encapsulate.
Willow
To live in half-life, half-love...better then to not live it...strangers then. So beautiful, Kasai. Your words have such depth to them. Searing and painful, beautiful and wild, strangely comforting...so many emotions you encapsulate.
Willow
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 6:49pm
Exactly, Willow, better then not to have lived it, if it was not a complete connection. It only hurts us in the end.
Thank you, sweet Willow, for such lovely comments, and thank you for seeing my words for what they are...
Thank you, sweet Willow, for such lovely comments, and thank you for seeing my words for what they are...
Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 1:48pm
Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
3rd Nov 2016 6:51pm
Funny how love does that to a person,we just don't always see it.
Thanks for reading...
Thanks for reading...
Re. Love, if it's enough
Feeling this
Even though I'm pretty much a stranger
Will complete what you started
We are seers babe .....
Even though I'm pretty much a stranger
Will complete what you started
We are seers babe .....
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4th Nov 2016 6:24am
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
4th Nov 2016 6:29am
Re. Love, if it's enough
4th Nov 2016 11:28am
This feels so deep and beautiful. Feelings that I've had myself.
You had so many great lines as well "Love was a stranger to me, even when I said those words to other men"
That one was one of my favs ^^
You had so many great lines as well "Love was a stranger to me, even when I said those words to other men"
That one was one of my favs ^^
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
4th Nov 2016 11:52am
Re. Love, if it's enough
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Nov 2016 11:34pm
5th Nov 2016 11:22pm
Oh my sweetburningangels without wings.
Hold on, I have to make room for this,
I'll be right back
Hold on, I have to make room for this,
I'll be right back

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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
6th Nov 2016 2:43am
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10th Nov 2016 2:21pm
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Re: Re. Love, if it's enough
11th Nov 2016 5:10am
Love has a tendency to level a person, I suppose.
I thank you for the kind words...
I thank you for the kind words...