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Love is
Love is narcotics
A sin to those who don’t have it
Love is wealth
Spat at by the poor
Love is corruption
To those corrupt
Love is phantom pains
Of a hand you don’t hold
Love is longed
As much as people long their love
Love is
A sin to those who don’t have it
Love is wealth
Spat at by the poor
Love is corruption
To those corrupt
Love is phantom pains
Of a hand you don’t hold
Love is longed
As much as people long their love
Love is
Published 3rd Aug 2011
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4th Aug 2011 7:57am
I liked your poem, but the ending seemed rather abrupt. I know you intended to leave the reader in suspense with just "love is" but adding on one final comment about what it is would make the poem feel more resolved. I did like it though. Your style is straightforward and your imagery was well done. Good job.
4th Aug 2011 2:44pm
what if i put love is (next line) and always will be as the closing lines.
thank you so much. i;m so glad you liked the poem. it means a lot
thank you so much. i;m so glad you liked the poem. it means a lot
