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not tonight
some nights are harder than others
for the pen just refuses to stand
this feeling of thumping heart
ready to spill onto paper
will
tonight be left untended
adrenalin may have flooded the veins
but this heart has been harpooned
as it breached the surface to exhale
wounded is the word
no ink will flow for now
.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/253540-goodbye/
for the pen just refuses to stand
this feeling of thumping heart
ready to spill onto paper
will
tonight be left untended
adrenalin may have flooded the veins
but this heart has been harpooned
as it breached the surface to exhale
wounded is the word
no ink will flow for now
.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/253540-goodbye/
Published 29th Oct 2016
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29th Oct 2016 3:26pm
I feel responsible for this feeling and I deeply apologize this hurt my heart to read because I know it's my fault..
I hope you can forgive me..
Brenda
I hope you can forgive me..
Brenda
for all my sadness Brenda you made me laugh at your conclusion. This is not about you, infact your spark actually woke me up. This is about our friend deciding to leave us..
if anyone needs seeking forgiveness is me for my lack of clarification! Please forgive me for the confusion.. I swear to God it's not you or your excellent initiative Brenda!!
if anyone needs seeking forgiveness is me for my lack of clarification! Please forgive me for the confusion.. I swear to God it's not you or your excellent initiative Brenda!!
29th Oct 2016 3:40pm
oh i'm relieved thank KDAmb yes our dear Heart hopefully she will change her mind.. thank you dear one..
love Brenda
love Brenda
29th Oct 2016 3:44pm
Yes you are absolutely right Brenda! I do hope indeed as well She does! For whatever reasons she's doing it I hope it passes soon and our friend MsHeart starts beating......again!
regards and more
KDAmB
:-)
regards and more
KDAmB
:-)
29th Oct 2016 3:34pm
Hopefully this to shall pass. Take a deep breath and know things will be okay.
29th Oct 2016 3:41pm
I honestly do hope as well Jerry! Thank You friend for reminding.. indeed this too shall pass both for me and my aggrieved Friend!
warm regards
KDAmB
warm regards
KDAmB
29th Oct 2016 5:12pm
In only a few months she found her way within the heart of many here. I too hope she will change her mind. It is not always obvious in a poem who has stirred the words, but the heart that did the stirring has obviously mixed many feelings tonight...
You have expressed your feelings well!
JJ
You have expressed your feelings well!
JJ
29th Oct 2016 5:33pm
Thank You JJ! Yes indeed she had made her place within many a hearts here.
I appreciate you as a person immensely and your presence is always welcome JJ! Thank You!
kind regards
KDAmB
I appreciate you as a person immensely and your presence is always welcome JJ! Thank You!
kind regards
KDAmB
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 8:48pm
This is actually a very heartfelt tribute. I read the link first to see what this poem referred too. You should be very proud of this. It's stripped back, and short and this is what makes it powerful I think.
Heartfelt good thoughts your way. Thank you for the read.
Heartfelt good thoughts your way. Thank you for the read.
30th Oct 2016 7:13am
Thank You Miss!! I welcome your presence and appreciation. Well, wrote what I felt and when we speak the truth it is easily visible. Honoured by your views, thank You once again
KDAmB
☺
KDAmB
☺
29th Oct 2016 10:03pm
Such a beautiful hear felt piece. Something amazing will happen when you least expect you got a good soul
29th Oct 2016 10:05pm
Such a beautiful hear felt piece. Something amazing will happen when you least expect you got a good soul much love
30th Oct 2016 7:17am
Thank You my bro! Can't express enough my gratitude for both your support and appreciation!
Regards
KDAmB ☺
Regards
KDAmB ☺
31st Oct 2016 4:46am
Wounded is the word > I felt the same way!
I wasn't able to do anything that night, it's so sad to see people leaving!
Thank you for sharing your feelings!
I wasn't able to do anything that night, it's so sad to see people leaving!
Thank you for sharing your feelings!
6th Nov 2016 5:49am
Sad to learn you share the sadness my friend! I do sincerely hope she returns some day. Soon. I appreciate your visit and kind gesture my friend, my apologies for the delay in thanking you!
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
31st Oct 2016 3:44pm
I was away when she left us. :( This write is beautiful. I do hope she returns to us one day. She has left a void in her wake. Thank you for sharing this...
Willow
Willow
6th Nov 2016 5:44am
Thank You Willows for your visit and sharing the sad feeling. i do indeed hope she returns one day and so for all the other peers that have left us!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
31st Oct 2016 9:25pm
I am afraid I seem to be out of the loop on this one, have read all the comments but sadly I have no Idea who its for
nevertheless The reader does not need to know as it is a fine poem as it stands - it reeks of sadness,frustration and loss - which seems to appropriate given its background - a great we poem :-)
nevertheless The reader does not need to know as it is a fine poem as it stands - it reeks of sadness,frustration and loss - which seems to appropriate given its background - a great we poem :-)
6th Nov 2016 5:45am
Welcome Dave! my apologies for the delay in replying. Always have and will appreciate your visiting with me and your kind remarks which do mean a lot to me!
Thank You Dave!
KDAmB
Thank You Dave!
KDAmB
1st Nov 2016 6:08am
Had many a night like the one described in this poem, lately more so than others. Great poem brother.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
6th Nov 2016 5:47am
Welcome dear Bro Anon! My apologies for the delay in replying. Deeply appreciate your kind gesture and support!
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
6th Nov 2016 4:52am
6th Nov 2016 5:02am
Welcome dear friend! Thank You so much for visiting and leaving such kind words. Appreciate immensely both!
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
