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in my pockets...
'twas year two thousand ten
when i took up the pen
when you and i were squeezed
was the toughest period then
wrote a few lines
felt the release
no care of verse or rhymes
heart felt at ease
i wrote here and there
in notes sometimes you'd find
the ones i never shared
in my pockets, left behind
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved.
Author's note:
Oringially written for the competition "confessions" never got chance to complete or submit. Neverthless a non-fiction write.
when i took up the pen
when you and i were squeezed
was the toughest period then
wrote a few lines
felt the release
no care of verse or rhymes
heart felt at ease
i wrote here and there
in notes sometimes you'd find
the ones i never shared
in my pockets, left behind
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved.
Author's note:
Oringially written for the competition "confessions" never got chance to complete or submit. Neverthless a non-fiction write.
Published 6th Nov 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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6th Nov 2016 10:36am
6th Nov 2016 11:04am
Welcome dear bro ! I am glad you liked the read. I thank you and welcome your honest opinion!
with regards
KDAmB
with regards
KDAmB
6th Nov 2016 12:30pm
Writing truly is a release!
This one made me smile... it's always nice to hear something personal like when someone started writing, but maybe that's just me ;-) Great write!
This one made me smile... it's always nice to hear something personal like when someone started writing, but maybe that's just me ;-) Great write!
6th Nov 2016 12:36pm
Agreed 👍 💯 % dear friend!
Glad it made you smile. Of course a write inked for confession comp would include but a genuine confession. Just wrote what happened . Once again my gratitude for both your visit and kind appreciation.
Thank You
KDAmB
Glad it made you smile. Of course a write inked for confession comp would include but a genuine confession. Just wrote what happened . Once again my gratitude for both your visit and kind appreciation.
Thank You
KDAmB
6th Nov 2016 1:28pm
lovely KDAmB,
you can feel the hearts ease of expression in your poems...
enjoyed how the last stanza is open to whether notelets were shared or not...
you can feel the hearts ease of expression in your poems...
enjoyed how the last stanza is open to whether notelets were shared or not...
6th Nov 2016 10:19pm
Welcome dear friend LR!!! ☺
ever so glad you liked this scribbling. Deeply appreciate your visit and keen insight. Much obliged!
Kind regards
KDAmB ☺
ever so glad you liked this scribbling. Deeply appreciate your visit and keen insight. Much obliged!
Kind regards
KDAmB ☺
6th Nov 2016 6:22pm
an excellent autobiographical write, I can really feel the emotions behind the words :-)
So well written :-)
So well written :-)
6th Nov 2016 10:22pm
Welcome dear friend Dave!
Glad that you felt what was attempted at conveying. Appreciate immensely your friendship. I welcome your presence and kind feedback .
Thank You once again
KDAmB ☺
Glad that you felt what was attempted at conveying. Appreciate immensely your friendship. I welcome your presence and kind feedback .
Thank You once again
KDAmB ☺
6th Nov 2016 6:53pm
6th Nov 2016 10:25pm
Jerry! my friend, am truly humbled by your visit and such generous appreciation. Humbled once again by your RL add Sir!
Thank You Jerry!
KDAmB ☺ ☺
Thank You Jerry!
KDAmB ☺ ☺
6th Nov 2016 8:16pm
6th Nov 2016 10:28pm
Welcome Kate!
your words and RL add truly humbled me. It is for me indeed an honour to hear that from a poet like You Miss!
warm regards
KDAmB
☺
your words and RL add truly humbled me. It is for me indeed an honour to hear that from a poet like You Miss!
warm regards
KDAmB
☺
10th Nov 2016 9:32am
10th Nov 2016 10:51am
Welcome my Bro! I am well and truly glad you enjoyed rand like this read! Thank You so much for your support bro! Always mean a lot!
