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I Can't Help but Wonder
I can’t help but wonder
If I write about you and ponder you in my mind
Do you exist?
I know you aren’t there in person, here
But in some side pocket of reality, in some alternate dimension
Is there a world where the words that I write become reality?
It brings me comfort to think it may be true
That by thinking of you
Giving the words that you say and the things that you do
Living the life you lead in the world that comes from my mind
That you actually exist there
Outside of time but real
I can’t help but wonder
If I write about you and ponder you in my mind
Do you exist?
I know you aren’t there in person, here
But in some side pocket of reality, in some alternate dimension
Is there a world where the words that I write become reality?
It brings me comfort to think it may be true
That by thinking of you
Giving the words that you say and the things that you do
Living the life you lead in the world that comes from my mind
That you actually exist there
Outside of time but real
I can’t help but wonder
Published 26th Oct 2016
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26th Oct 2016 4:30pm
We can create existence out of yearning, but it will never feel quite real. Such a powerful message! I have been in this place. Currently in this place, inside of it...metamorphosing.
26th Oct 2016 6:07pm
It brings about what we truly seek in people. It’s a careful balance though not to miss out on those who are great just because they don’t measure up to something you’ve created.
26th Oct 2016 7:03pm
26th Oct 2016 4:33pm
I think this lady you seek in your poetry will materialize for you in time.. wonderful deep emotions expressed..
love Crim
love Crim
26th Oct 2016 6:08pm
Anonymous
26th Oct 2016 4:45pm
That yearning, allows the passion to burn even deeper within.
The longing can be a true ache within. One in which nothing else can compare.
Great write 💓
The longing can be a true ache within. One in which nothing else can compare.
Great write 💓
26th Oct 2016 6:06pm
It’s kind of a comforting thought that somewhere out there, something that comes in your mind that you know so where actually exists, no matter how far out or incredible it may seem.
Anonymous
26th Oct 2016 6:46pm
Yes. Very much so.
I agree.
I agree.
27th Oct 2016 12:13pm
Yes... its exactly how you attract and manifest your hearts desire. Trust, and believe in yourself !
Without that visualisation planted in the depths of your heart and soul, in the first instance, your mind isn't capable of manifesting on your behalf.
So. Keep infusing your thoughts to draw what you're needing, and secretly desiring, into your life... 🎈🌻😎☄
Without that visualisation planted in the depths of your heart and soul, in the first instance, your mind isn't capable of manifesting on your behalf.
So. Keep infusing your thoughts to draw what you're needing, and secretly desiring, into your life... 🎈🌻😎☄
27th Oct 2016 2:05pm
It’s a nice place to go for a little mini vacation, that’s for sure. My imagination is pretty extensive. Thanks for your words. I’m glad to know it’s not just me who ponders things like this.
