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"PNP..." (Potential n' Purpose)
Even if...
She banished her tears
to the nether regions
of her besieged soul...
Fused hope
together with tattered
fragments of a long-
dead -beaten heart...
albeit at times,
in the darkest of hours,
an embittered mind
edged ever further
from the brink of sanity...
It's possible...
The 'cipher of her life'
circle hadn't yet reached
completion...
*A dedication to the many
women who struggle thru
this unruly turbulence
called...LIFE*
She banished her tears
to the nether regions
of her besieged soul...
Fused hope
together with tattered
fragments of a long-
dead -beaten heart...
albeit at times,
in the darkest of hours,
an embittered mind
edged ever further
from the brink of sanity...
It's possible...
The 'cipher of her life'
circle hadn't yet reached
completion...
*A dedication to the many
women who struggle thru
this unruly turbulence
called...LIFE*
Published 25th Oct 2016
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25th Oct 2016 11:17pm
The reason why I rather be that one who revives and not a slaughterer of feminine piousness.
No saint but this is what made me a better man today, better than the -I- of yesterday.
The very reason I'm here supporting mine, Dude your words are incantations.
Much love brotha
No saint but this is what made me a better man today, better than the -I- of yesterday.
The very reason I'm here supporting mine, Dude your words are incantations.
Much love brotha
25th Oct 2016 11:23pm
Damn bro. Your support is very uplifting... Big UPs to you n yours. :)
Appreciate u much :)
Appreciate u much :)
25th Oct 2016 11:55pm
26th Oct 2016 00:12am
Aaaaawwww... Happy you enjoyed n deeply appreciate your support sweetness :)
26th Oct 2016 00:13am
Thanks for this wonderful piece. I think that every woman needs to hear these words that you write so wonderfully. I truly enjoyed it.
26th Oct 2016 6:21pm
26th Oct 2016 5:35am
Poetik, you blew me away!
I love this piece and when I saw it was a dedication to women who struggle I loved it even more!
Thank you... we women need to hear this :-)
The 'cipher of her life'
circle hadn't yet reached
completion... > I'm far from completion... love these lines...
I love this piece and when I saw it was a dedication to women who struggle I loved it even more!
Thank you... we women need to hear this :-)
The 'cipher of her life'
circle hadn't yet reached
completion... > I'm far from completion... love these lines...
26th Oct 2016 6:24pm
26th Oct 2016 2:03pm
Oh this is gorgeous, I love the sudden turn at the end it left me a bit speechless :)
26th Oct 2016 2:07pm
Thank you beautiful, I feel blessed you found it worthy of your time n thoughts :)
26th Oct 2016 6:12pm
26th Oct 2016 6:26pm
27th Oct 2016 4:58pm
That was beautiful and special. To have come from a man....wow, you understand a lot.
27th Oct 2016 7:20pm
Thank you...n yea I think I do pretty much, Afterall I have 7 sisters lol... Truly appreciate your support sweetness :)
28th Oct 2016 3:54am
Thank you this my sweet heart'd guy..
can't say more because this..struck
many chords in me and now their tunes
are performing..somewhere deep in
inside
Merci,
-Howlings
can't say more because this..struck
many chords in me and now their tunes
are performing..somewhere deep in
inside
Merci,
-Howlings
28th Oct 2016 8:52am
Well then if there's 'music' that sent you higher, I must inquire..."can I have this dance?" lol thank you my wonderful 'smile booster!' :)
1st Nov 2016 5:43pm
1st Nov 2016 10:40pm
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 2:32am
You make my heart and soul hum.
Can you hear them inside me, baby?
of course you can :)
Can you hear them inside me, baby?
of course you can :)
3rd Nov 2016 9:53am
Was that soft, melodic, murmur in me, birthed by you? WOW now it all makes sense! lol... So sweet you are my dearest, truly grateful n honored
by n for you. :)
by n for you. :)
6th Nov 2016 10:37am
6th Nov 2016 8:21pm
Aaawww.... C'mere... Big big hug to you my sweetness :)... N of course, Grateful as ever :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 12:47pm
6th Nov 2016 9:59pm
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6th Nov 2016 10:22pm
Thank you for your sweet comment my dear! Truly grateful for your thoughts n support :)
27th Nov 2016 8:10pm
Such a beautiful piece of writing.
'Fused hope
together with tattered
fragments of a long-
dead -beaten heart...'
Perfectly put 💜
'Fused hope
together with tattered
fragments of a long-
dead -beaten heart...'
Perfectly put 💜
27th Nov 2016 9:47pm
