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Waiting for Motivation
I’m waiting for her kind of motivation
an addiction that brings out the need in me
like waves taking my breath with every hit
right before devouring me whole
I’m stuck inside a vision repeating
of diamonds sparkling into my eyes
she is the treasure I wish to hold forever
hands that grip each other tight into paradise
living inside a cookie cutter existence for so long
everyone seemed so boring and wrong
she makes this world feel so wonderfully different
like I’m living up in space with the stars
without her I’d probably curl up into a ball
I hate dealing with people when she’s gone
a dark place I have to call my reality
knowing nothing of right and wrong on those days
yeah, I’m waiting for her power to come back
I don’t want to go without her for too long
an angel breathing heaven into me
holding my world up high inside her love
an addiction that brings out the need in me
like waves taking my breath with every hit
right before devouring me whole
I’m stuck inside a vision repeating
of diamonds sparkling into my eyes
she is the treasure I wish to hold forever
hands that grip each other tight into paradise
living inside a cookie cutter existence for so long
everyone seemed so boring and wrong
she makes this world feel so wonderfully different
like I’m living up in space with the stars
without her I’d probably curl up into a ball
I hate dealing with people when she’s gone
a dark place I have to call my reality
knowing nothing of right and wrong on those days
yeah, I’m waiting for her power to come back
I don’t want to go without her for too long
an angel breathing heaven into me
holding my world up high inside her love
Published 25th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2016 11:01am
This is beautiful, DC 💓
The depth of emotion is potent, and felt deeply.
The depth of emotion is potent, and felt deeply.
25th Oct 2016 5:01pm
25th Oct 2016 12:43pm
I don't have the words to describe how utterly beautiful this is!
Emotions laid bare... deeply felt... you are so talented, DC!
Emotions laid bare... deeply felt... you are so talented, DC!
Thanks sugarpuss!
Your comment was so good it made my cream stick blow!
P.S. Told you 😉
Your comment was so good it made my cream stick blow!
P.S. Told you 😉
25th Oct 2016 8:03pm
26th Oct 2016 1:49am
Hahaha!
Now you're really going to get the rumors going.
You know how much I care about what people think 😉
P.S. You know I will 👍
Now you're really going to get the rumors going.
You know how much I care about what people think 😉
P.S. You know I will 👍
25th Oct 2016 1:35pm
25th Oct 2016 5:17pm
25th Oct 2016 1:43pm
To open one's self up to such vulnerability and share emotion this way...you've created true beauty with these words :)
25th Oct 2016 5:18pm
I feel like in life I hold in a lot of emotions. When it comes to poetry I am able to be free with it 😁
Thanks for enjoying! Very much appreciate.
Thanks for enjoying! Very much appreciate.
25th Oct 2016 3:54pm
25th Oct 2016 5:20pm
Your comment made me smile.
Thanks for reading my love, and showing your love... hehe 😁
Thanks for reading my love, and showing your love... hehe 😁
Anonymous
25th Oct 2016 6:27pm
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26th Oct 2016 1:36pm
26th Oct 2016 4:16am
That,sweet motivation,it keeps us inspired,keeps us moving in a world that seems much too still without it.
'yeah, I’m waiting for her power to come back
I don’t want to go without her for too long
an angel breathing heaven into me
holding my world up high inside her love '
What an amazing place to be....
'yeah, I’m waiting for her power to come back
I don’t want to go without her for too long
an angel breathing heaven into me
holding my world up high inside her love '
What an amazing place to be....
26th Oct 2016 1:37pm
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28th Oct 2016 5:29pm
28th Oct 2016 4:41am
28th Oct 2016 5:30pm
Oh wow, that's so cool to say that. I'm glad it had that kind of impact.
Thanks!
Thanks!
Anonymous
29th Oct 2016 5:34pm
Outstanding Devils.......such beautiful emotion towards the one who makes you who you are.......that's holds your life inside their heart.......very sensual luving write......enjoyed much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Oct 2016 00:59am
