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Harder, Darling
Saturday night lonely, thinking crazy romantic things - wish the wind would pick you up & carry you here. You...
In your arms, lying on the couch, naked just like Pippa with her grey-haired lover. I would love to see that vision in a dream when I sleep.
Sometimes I close my eyes to see you better. I say your name and it is beautiful on my lips. Beautiful,like us.
You said you saw me with bluebirds and rabbits and chipmunks gathered around me, the dwarves waiting to do wicked things to me in the gingerbread cottage. Fuck, why is that so hot?
When I sit and stare at the clouds, I go to unfound territories in search of poetry, art, sexual deviance, things that will make you love me more. I consider doing time in a stranger's bed, to taunt you with another man's smell on my skin. And when I come back, I come back to you.
( scene from The Private Lives of Pippa Lee )
In your arms, lying on the couch, naked just like Pippa with her grey-haired lover. I would love to see that vision in a dream when I sleep.
Sometimes I close my eyes to see you better. I say your name and it is beautiful on my lips. Beautiful,like us.
You said you saw me with bluebirds and rabbits and chipmunks gathered around me, the dwarves waiting to do wicked things to me in the gingerbread cottage. Fuck, why is that so hot?
When I sit and stare at the clouds, I go to unfound territories in search of poetry, art, sexual deviance, things that will make you love me more. I consider doing time in a stranger's bed, to taunt you with another man's smell on my skin. And when I come back, I come back to you.
( scene from The Private Lives of Pippa Lee )
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Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 11:25am
pretty girls should always be naked;
naked & seductive like your poem, Kas...
naked & seductive like your poem, Kas...
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24th Oct 2016 11:30am
You amaze and flatter me, John.
Small, intriguing shards of poetry hiding quietly in your lovely comments...
Small, intriguing shards of poetry hiding quietly in your lovely comments...
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24th Oct 2016 2:09pm
Re: Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 10:19pm
Thank you,yearnings indeed. I guess they need somewhere to go and poetry seems the perfect place....
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24th Oct 2016 2:39pm
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24th Oct 2016 10:22pm
I agree,a very peaceful place. The photo says it all,that kind of love is beautiful and should be kept close...
Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 2:57pm
For some reason I keep getting stuck on the dwarves...images dance through my mind...Beautifully written, Kasai...wistful with a touch of whimsy. :)
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Re: Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 10:31pm
Thank you, Wiilow, I think Snow white had the right idea. I,too see those images and it's nice to know you shared my vision....
Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 3:48pm
Another piece of art, Kasai!
The "Fuck, why is that so hot?" made me laugh!
Thoroughly enjoyed this one!
The "Fuck, why is that so hot?" made me laugh!
Thoroughly enjoyed this one!
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Re: Re. Harder, Darling
24th Oct 2016 10:39pm
That's so great, Duende! Glad to make you smile,life is too short not to.
Thanks for sharing...
Thanks for sharing...
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24th Oct 2016 4:16pm
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25th Oct 2016 1:15am
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Re. Harder, Darling
25th Oct 2016 5:06pm
Evendreams like these are wonderful to have on nice quiet days when the luxury of thought and imagination invades the reality of living, aren't they, Kasai?
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25th Oct 2016 7:27pm
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10th Nov 2016 3:49pm
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