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When He Genuinely Loves You~
When he genuinely loves you….
he captures your dreams in the palms of his hands
then blows kisses to the subtle breeze they drift upon.
When you converse with him he focuses attentively,
listens with an open-mind, not always on one accord
or in agreement…but respectful of your conviction
and your power to discern, question and….understand.
He strolls ahead of you if you want to experience
the heat of uncertainty, but the blaze may be too much.
He floats steadily by your side when life spreads your wings
but you could utilize his turbulence to continue your purpose.
He worships you from behind, cause’ let’s be honest…
(…he loves the view)
and if he has any inkling of the beautiful queen
that resides in you and the radiant flame you will become,
he will surely want to recline in the passing-by
of your intoxicating scent…
the way your thighs tease each other and give the dip in your hips
a confident smile.
When he genuinely loves you….
He can tame his rage into thick debate and deep dialogue,
knowing damn well you’re a woman that’s addicted to knowledge
and a fiend to be stimulated, mentally.
That, part of your provocativeness is your skills to select your views,
charm him with a dissertation or two, then slow-ride and grind
his remaining sanity away under the sheets, all before 1 am.
You cave-in his walls of supremacy…and he is emboldened...
motivated to co-exist in this blissful universe of being a lover
and a friend.
He causes you to shout, “Got damn!” with just the heat beneath
his breath brushing your lobes, because you anticipate the apex
of his touch against your skin, depositing carnal dividends,
dripping richness.
He understands… and never takes for granted
the exhilarating highs, and the devastating lows,
since…the highs are more joyful to live inside,
and the lows are the fundamental ingredients that fortify your covenant.
He craves you beyond a timeless moment,
or crazy day that evolved into something special.
So….he stays…there,
because he genuinely loves…
You.
Rain~
Written by
RainC_Tara
(rain1courtel)
Published 21st Oct 2016
| Edited 24th Oct 2016
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Sorry guys, didn't know I had the comments blocked... thanks for the p.m. ....friend... :)
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21st Oct 2016 6:22pm
I always know when I see you post that it's best to take a deep breath before opening it...I know I'll be breathless reading it. Without fail, you get me. :)
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21st Oct 2016 6:27pm
aww... Willow, your words made my heart smile. So sweet of you to say, thank you pretty lady... :)
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21st Oct 2016 6:34pm
You express great wisdom, no doubt from your life's experience, but from a unique perspective for you. A wonderful expression that should be true for everyone!
JJ
JJ
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21st Oct 2016 6:42pm
Thanks luv, I'm glad you get me and this ink, JJ! You always do. :)
Pleased to see you take her home...
Pleased to see you take her home...
Re. When He Genuinely Loves You~
21st Oct 2016 6:52pm
Every woman deserves a man like this and who truly loves us in this way. Thanks again for this piece. It is quite wonderful and the language is powerful (while being sensual at the same time). You have such an interesting perspective. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
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22nd Oct 2016 6:25pm
eswaller, thank you for the motivating response, I'm so appreciative of it. :)Indeed every woman deserves a man like this, as well as every man deserving of woman with the same love, adoration and respect. :) Welcome to my poetic world. xo
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 7:53pm
Yes....yes...and yes!! 💓
Passionate words of wisdom!
I love every ounce of detail in this.
Beautiful ink..
Passionate words of wisdom!
I love every ounce of detail in this.
Beautiful ink..
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22nd Oct 2016 6:33pm
Happy you're in agreement with this, WTHeart! ;) Thank you for the positive vibe in my direction. Appreciate you!
Re. When He Genuinely Loves You~
21st Oct 2016 8:21pm
This was beautiful hun..... All I can say through out was Amen and amen isn't that the truth..... Executed with precision..... Lovely.....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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Let the church say, Amen! :) Thrilled you uttered...'so be it' to this ink. Truth is a wonderful thang'. So good to see you BSavvy! xo
Pen hug~
Pen hug~
Re. When He Genuinely Loves You~
21st Oct 2016 8:31pm
Among some of the many gems the went into the creation of this thesis, this one truly captured me:
".....part of your provocativeness is your skills to select your views,
charm him with a dissertation or two, then slow ride and grind
his remaining sanity away under the sheets, all before 1 am."
Excellent dissertation Dr. Rain. Thus are the dreams that I hope to find in a partner one day. I give you a ☑️ plus for this profound documentary.
".....part of your provocativeness is your skills to select your views,
charm him with a dissertation or two, then slow ride and grind
his remaining sanity away under the sheets, all before 1 am."
Excellent dissertation Dr. Rain. Thus are the dreams that I hope to find in a partner one day. I give you a ☑️ plus for this profound documentary.
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lol...@ Dr. Rain............Not!!! :) Glad a few lines captured you Archie, and 'hope' is a beautiful thang' to own. You don't need to search for this type of love,... trust me, she will find you. :) Thanks hun, appreciate you kidnapping her...
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21st Oct 2016 9:32pm
Yes yes creative genius in words
Truly gorgeous
But if I may..
Perfect picture to accompany my thoughts when reading xD
Truly gorgeous
But if I may..
Perfect picture to accompany my thoughts when reading xD
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22nd Oct 2016 6:45pm
...your words humble me, Rose! Thanks lovely lady!
Always great to hear from you.:)
Always great to hear from you.:)
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 11:26pm
Lady Rain.. simply brilliant.. and such a luscious write.. you leave me breathless.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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22nd Oct 2016 6:48pm
....butterflies whenever someone uses breathless to describe the state my ink managed to leave them in. ;) Thank you Dave!
Re. When He Genuinely Loves You~
21st Oct 2016 11:51pm
Miss Rain...your inks are always so beautifully penned. Lovely words from a lovely soul. 💋
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22nd Oct 2016 6:54pm
You make my skin blush, LyricalT. :) I'm always ecstatic when you pop-up, grab my poem by the hand, and take her home with you; kinda' like a one night stand. lol... ;) Thank you sweety!
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22nd Oct 2016 00:13am
What a wonderful wordsmith you are Tara and so lucky to be loved so passionately. (I know you deserve to be)
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22nd Oct 2016 7:02pm
A love that most women crave...and yes, luck has a lot to do with it. I'm not that lucky, but I dare not complain about a good thang' ;)
Hugs to you Tony! xo
Hugs to you Tony! xo
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24th Oct 2016 5:32am
<3 Thanks babe! Once again, I appreciate you for slowly brushing against my poem's skin, finding grammatical errors that my tired eyes didn't see.. xo #Kisses...
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23rd Oct 2016 8:52am
Oh sweet Rain... Yea I'm in concert with chorus here... Wise n beauty-full u truly are! :)
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24th Oct 2016 5:34am
Oh Poe, stop flattering me! I'm just playing, please continue... lol :)
Thanks darlin'....
Thanks darlin'....
Re. When He Genuinely Loves You~
23rd Oct 2016 10:02pm
This begins with ethereal romance but your idea of genuine love is well developed, occasionally erotic and funny.
When he genuinely loves you….
he capture your dreams in the palms of his hands
then blows kisses to the subtle breeze they drift upon
You become more detailed and specific with the personal touch.
He strolls ahead of you if you want to experience
the heat of uncertainty, but the blaze may be too much.
He floats steadily by your side when life spreads your wings
but you could utilize his turbulence to continue your purpose.
He worships you from behind, cause’ let’s be honest…
(…he loves the view)
He has every reason to worship you Rain. You're one of the best writers here, and in all honesty I love your view.
When he genuinely loves you….
he capture your dreams in the palms of his hands
then blows kisses to the subtle breeze they drift upon
You become more detailed and specific with the personal touch.
He strolls ahead of you if you want to experience
the heat of uncertainty, but the blaze may be too much.
He floats steadily by your side when life spreads your wings
but you could utilize his turbulence to continue your purpose.
He worships you from behind, cause’ let’s be honest…
(…he loves the view)
He has every reason to worship you Rain. You're one of the best writers here, and in all honesty I love your view.
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Crow, your commentary always have a way of sliding under my skin, slowly warming me all over. You leave a feel-good burn each time you visit me. Humbled by your verbs. Happy you decided to take her home withya. "and in all honesty I love your view." <--Hahaa.... ;)
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2nd Jan 2017 9:19pm
...you are absolutely the perfect boost to my ego, DaddyP! Thank you luv...
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11th Mar 2018 4:00pm
a really engaging read ! so well expressed with such beauty in your words. a truly enjoyable piece of writing .
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2019 10:45pm
Sigh...just...yeah, holding this beauty close ... ~Willow
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